THE RULES ARE SIMPLE:
"the poem must be 4 - 40 lines. That doesn't include line breaks or the title. One entry per person. Post your entry here. I'll move them all later when the poll starts"
a bunch of poems enter, one poem leaves, and we all remember the speaker for the trees fondly
― BIG HOOS aka the steendriver, Wednesday, 3 September 2014 02:15 (nine years ago) link
Deadline is October 1, please submit no more than 2 poemz
― BIG HOOS aka the steendriver, Wednesday, 3 September 2014 02:16 (nine years ago) link
Adieu Monsieur Coyote!
Night falls like a curtain,a gentle veil, the mercifulobscurities of love.
Daylight drops from the skylike a piano. Boom. The schadenfreudic boom. A nation's thirst for justifiedcomeuppance.
Heaven's anvil renders yourRepose, But hold your applause tillI affirm your sense of victimhood.
Boom.
― Treeship, Wednesday, 3 September 2014 02:45 (nine years ago) link
^ breaks fast, shows early foot
― Aimless, Wednesday, 3 September 2014 03:30 (nine years ago) link
irresolute
in your voice i hearyour petulant, put-upon pout
you’re talking about food;i’m starving
pursed lips hold firmfrom the brink of solipsism
if i screamed right nowwe’d alight
embers dissipating, atomisticfluttering on the breeze as fireflakes
but, irresolute,our slumped shoulders, arms akimbo
body of evidence suggestsdivision
pinching hairs out from their socketspeeling thin layers of skin
the hastening of regenerationa digital delay knob spun to maturity/martyrdom
upon repeat, your note sounds flatagainst the foreground of new voices
― owe me the shmoney (m bison), Wednesday, 3 September 2014 03:39 (nine years ago) link
I Don't Know Why It Does This
My brain comes up withweird nicknamesfor famous peopleHartison FortisonRobben WibbenI don't know why it does this
Yet I have no such namesfor the peopleI see everyday
― Tuomas, Wednesday, 3 September 2014 06:49 (nine years ago) link
Tamping
the stewardessin morning asksmy drinklikeand I
say“please’m Turkey,ofthe Wild.”
“oh and um”adding“not an ice,for pleasing.”
she eyebrow raisethink low of me.me is and am,and are to be.
― BIG HOOS aka the steendriver, Wednesday, 3 September 2014 18:08 (nine years ago) link
it's a little funny to see that and then a dash and "BIG HOOS aka the steendriver"
― BIG HOOS aka the steendriver, Wednesday, 3 September 2014 18:13 (nine years ago) link
Evil Doppelganger
Since my first day hereyou've made it very clearthat you think I'm incompetenta pointless peasant pissantI don't know what I've doneto bring your hatred onExcept remind you of yourselfwhen you were in better health
Maybe it's because you're my evil doppelganger
Despite our broad similarityYou're lacking in empathyWoefully deficient in intellectDifficult questions you deflectMaybe I should feel sorry for youand all the nasty schemes you doBut then I catch my sympathybecause you're lacking humanity
This job is a compromise for mebut it's the best you'll ever see
― I only listen to Vantablack Metal (snoball), Wednesday, 3 September 2014 18:15 (nine years ago) link
The Hippogriff Builds Its Nest
You know (you must!) that well-known unknown tree,so tall and straight within its inspecific woods,that fell one unnamed day, as we, absorbedin other things, perfected our fine ignorance,inapt to say it made the noiseless noiseit made.
O, most provoking tree!Suggestive, hintful, plausible tree,inhabiting an anteroom of my aestheticI cannot enter without shame, fear and hope.Why can't you be a hippogriff?
A garbled monster, easily laughed down,or sidled away from, consigned to low unreality,your condign home, where I as a childwiggled my several toes in the paradiseof fools?
Stubborn tree, unflinching, doubtless dead,You're still the stuff of houses, home of nests,that cannot be built, though built they areand lived in, as I seem to do, imperfectly, as well befits an ignorance not perfected.
― Aimless, Thursday, 4 September 2014 22:44 (nine years ago) link
just a periodic bump, so that potentially interested parties may become aware of it
― Aimless, Saturday, 6 September 2014 17:40 (nine years ago) link
who put the bump
― BIG HOOS aka the steendriver, Tuesday, 9 September 2014 02:34 (nine years ago) link
turn bump for what
― Mordy, Tuesday, 9 September 2014 02:36 (nine years ago) link
I posted this in the thread that died. here, have a rewrite.
The Aftertaste of Birth
Witness magnificent viaducts!stuttered I while she Iscissorfucked aimlessly.
You should have started elsewhere, oversharer.
Senators open letters chockablock with ricin butwhy not mandrake, or wolfsbane?Mark E. Smith knew his haruspex from his anthrax though admittedly a greatflabby flapping cunt was he.
Am I not a man? Do I not LOL?Maybe Father was right. It's a numbers game, and:I should just stick to my cards.
True miracles happen every daybut now you're insistingeverything's already been saidand said better by others.
Why denigrate what you do not understand?It's preferable to understand nothing.That's what works for most people.
Some people won't stop sayingin today's world.
In today's worldsome people are always the problem.In today's worldsome people never learn
and those are the ones we hate.
Give us Barabbasthey cry out in the darknessdragging curdled facesbehind the twilightlike cold masks in the park.
Forsooth. Forsooth.I bet you don't even know what that means.
It means close your browser.We're done here.
― a hard dom is good to find (Edward III), Tuesday, 9 September 2014 21:26 (nine years ago) link
i like it. if you had asked me after the first paragraph to guess, i would've sworn lj wrote it.
― Mordy, Tuesday, 9 September 2014 21:38 (nine years ago) link
wasn't that an entry last year
― nakh is the wintour of our diss content (darraghmac), Tuesday, 9 September 2014 21:42 (nine years ago) link
you expect me to write something new in a year's time? good god, I'm not a machine.
― a hard dom is good to find (Edward III), Tuesday, 9 September 2014 22:33 (nine years ago) link
i like about three fifths of it
― ♛ LIL UNIT ♛ (thomp), Tuesday, 9 September 2014 22:34 (nine years ago) link
honestly I can only support two fifths of it but I try to save my best work for college basketball message boards
― a hard dom is good to find (Edward III), Wednesday, 10 September 2014 01:17 (nine years ago) link
fair
― BIG HOOS aka the steendriver, Wednesday, 10 September 2014 15:47 (nine years ago) link
we're now to 7 entries with 20 days to go
bomp
― BIG HOOS aka the steendriver, Wednesday, 10 September 2014 20:33 (nine years ago) link
joe tex single
― BIG HOOS aka the steendriver, Thursday, 11 September 2014 17:44 (nine years ago) link
I'll submit again this year if I write something, fair?
― fedora, wherever it may find her (darraghmac), Sunday, 14 September 2014 03:56 (nine years ago) link
much better to write something to submit, then post it before you have much time to think about it. this is my usual modus operandi
― Aimless, Sunday, 14 September 2014 04:10 (nine years ago) link
never said I'd think about it tbf
― fedora, wherever it may find her (darraghmac), Sunday, 14 September 2014 04:38 (nine years ago) link
"Small Bump" is a song by British singer-songwriter Ed Sheeran, released as the fifth single from his debut studio album, +. The song was written by Sheeran and produced by Jake Gosling. The single peaked at number 25 on the UK Singles Chart.
― BIG HOOS aka the steendriver, Monday, 15 September 2014 17:36 (nine years ago) link
I'm on it but I'm also on vacation ffs
― fedora, wherever it may find her (darraghmac), Monday, 15 September 2014 18:17 (nine years ago) link
take your time!!!!!!!!! it is an all purpose bump
― BIG HOOS aka the steendriver, Monday, 15 September 2014 18:20 (nine years ago) link
while i try to think of a title for this thing i wrote for this thread i realize that there's no such thing as a good title, just titles that are less stupid than other titles which is to say less offensive which really becomes a problem when you'd like to offend
― Mordy, Monday, 15 September 2014 18:31 (nine years ago) link
titles pshaw
― fedora, wherever it may find her (darraghmac), Monday, 15 September 2014 18:32 (nine years ago) link
How about "And the Horse You Rode In On"?
― Aimless, Monday, 15 September 2014 18:33 (nine years ago) link
but when i submit it w/out a title it gets (fairly) retitled as "untitled" which i don't like much either
― Mordy, Monday, 15 September 2014 18:34 (nine years ago) link
call it untritled
― fedora, wherever it may find her (darraghmac), Monday, 15 September 2014 18:34 (nine years ago) link
"Bob Dylan's Dream #666"?"Brick Upside Your Head"?"Take Offense. Please."?
― Aimless, Monday, 15 September 2014 18:38 (nine years ago) link
i usually like the tactic of using the first line in quotation marks as the title
― Daphnis Celesta, Monday, 15 September 2014 18:40 (nine years ago) link
"inside of a poem its too dark to read"
― BIG HOOS aka the steendriver, Monday, 15 September 2014 19:24 (nine years ago) link
grammatically adventurous, too ^
― Mordy, Monday, 15 September 2014 19:25 (nine years ago) link
"anodyne,"
anodyne, alkaloids convalescing, thebaine there but for the grace of godat night we dream of enola gay, irradiated chemtrails and your touch when wegrasp one another gasping locutionary acts: hold me,i find peace in your touch.
shifting through transparent silica broadcasting battered missives,checking our tissues for ebola, foreheads for hemorrhagic feverour kidneys shut down lazy Sunday afternoons as we grapplefor one another slowly going blind.
katyusha fireworks, we read each other formal verse punctuatedby fajr-5 and the endless hours while we were just shadows yourbody is prose and i place my nose against your neck seeking eupnea,giggling, we forget our names.
― Mordy, Thursday, 18 September 2014 21:14 (nine years ago) link
and stay there
shouldering each a burden of a sixth of the lost at the lastthrough mosses, crosses, grasses, reeds, crooked concrete passescursing famine graveyards' slant and the stony famine hills they hauntand stony village faces mouthing stony funeral massesdown fifteen cruel and damned degrees in wet and sliding borrowed solespulled and pushed and crushed by weight and haunted by the funeral tollsand every second thinking that no matter how we gowe'd one then all fall, trip or slip on hidden cillini rocksand the every man-jack of us downhill-tumbling showwould end with a ring of broken crowns and jill sprung out the box
two minutes, two hours, a lifetime, then earthlowered, prayed, stayed, thanked diggers and crewshook hands by the side of the dark single berthand then left, having done the least we could do
― fedora, wherever it may find her (darraghmac), Friday, 19 September 2014 23:38 (nine years ago) link
:O
― imago, Friday, 19 September 2014 23:40 (nine years ago) link
the men's rights crew can write a fucking poem it seems
dmac that is...that's...i mean...
― imago, Friday, 19 September 2014 23:42 (nine years ago) link
I...did not enjoy that tbph
― fedora, wherever it may find her (darraghmac), Friday, 19 September 2014 23:43 (nine years ago) link
you've thrown yr soul onto the page, and we may there sup
― imago, Friday, 19 September 2014 23:44 (nine years ago) link
a lovely
― BIG HOOS aka the steendriver, Saturday, 20 September 2014 02:10 (nine years ago) link
I have the writers regret re the last minute title I put on that. what odds of changing before posting to other thread. maybe even changing ITT.
― fedora, wherever it may find her (darraghmac), Saturday, 20 September 2014 19:31 (nine years ago) link
title works brilliantly im irrelevant o
― imago, Saturday, 20 September 2014 19:34 (nine years ago) link
― BIG HOOS aka the steendriver, Tuesday, September 2, 2014
model of concision
― Aimless, Monday, 22 September 2014 18:05 (nine years ago) link
here's one more why not
Darling We Are Aging
darling we are aging in morningswrapped around each other at dawnlike a car embracing a tree trunk.we wander through the forests of ourbarking dreams, walking off whiskeyand thirsting in our sleep as theday bleeds in through the incense window.an owl cries out and i open my eyes.
you immaculate lit by the stereo glow,eyes closed and searching, searching.the needle stuck in a loop on therecord player. the songs haveended and now there is only yourbreathing and a click, click, click.
― BIG HOOS aka the steendriver, Monday, 22 September 2014 19:45 (nine years ago) link
Not really an official entry, so much as a momentary self-amusement, inspired by a thread title:
The Poetry of ILX
The poetry of ILX reviles mayonaise,and flings its zings cornucopiously,wears warts, sings, jigs, exhales a fetid haze,advances ever onward, seldom flees.
The poetry of ILX honors the fire,finds chickenbears where before none were,seeks some sad solace in glimming The Wire,and all around projects a sharp-edged blur.
The poetry of ILX would eulogize dead slebs,or castigate them just as much as you might please;it oft rejects the quiddities of debsand cheerfully wallows in ironic sleeze.
So doth our ILX bestride this silly worlda daddy-long-legs of collosal thoughts.But if the truth were truthfully unfurled,it was much more poetic in The Aughts.
― Aimless, Wednesday, 24 September 2014 04:50 (nine years ago) link
hey darraghmac that was great
― the late great, Wednesday, 24 September 2014 04:52 (nine years ago) link
thanks!
― zero content albums (darraghmac), Wednesday, 24 September 2014 08:28 (nine years ago) link
September 24, 2014
it is 2014 and i am in philadelphia. but in a more profound sense i am on the internetwith you, and it is 2009, because i am not with you,and can't be, because i lack inner resources.
wise men know when to let go,their poems are not this frantic and enjambed.their minds are like still reflective ponds and notlike herds of sentimental elephants, contradicting andtrampling all over what's important. but wait
i want to share something with you. it's very stupid. it's about love. and time is a palimpsestbut it's me who's fading
into you like the song or elsei'm the one who's here.
― Treeship, Thursday, 25 September 2014 01:34 (nine years ago) link
time's a wasting. 30 days hath September and all that jazz.
― Aimless, Sunday, 28 September 2014 19:19 (nine years ago) link
HOoS I sent u an ilxmail
― zero content albums (darraghmac), Sunday, 28 September 2014 19:24 (nine years ago) link
oh that prob didn't work tbh its an old mail
send me a fb msg?
― BIG HOOS aka the steendriver, Monday, 29 September 2014 05:20 (nine years ago) link
k
― zero content albums (darraghmac), Monday, 29 September 2014 06:09 (nine years ago) link
HAD WE BUT WORLD ENOUGH AND TIME
― BIG HOOS aka the steendriver, Tuesday, 30 September 2014 15:08 (nine years ago) link
October 1 in what part of the world? Darn. I have something but I'm couch-surfing until tomorrow.
― ∞, Tuesday, 30 September 2014 17:33 (nine years ago) link
Just toss it on the pile when you have a chance. At least you can be sure it will get read.
― Aimless, Wednesday, 1 October 2014 03:25 (nine years ago) link
STOP ALL THE CLOCKS
― BIG HOOS aka the steendriver, Wednesday, 1 October 2014 14:49 (nine years ago) link
lol I forgot this
yall have the stage
― Ƹ༑Ʒ (imago), Wednesday, 1 October 2014 14:51 (nine years ago) link
huh, don't we still have until the end of the day on October 1? that's the way deadlines usually work.
― disinclination loops (unregistered), Wednesday, 1 October 2014 14:55 (nine years ago) link
oh i didn't mean ~i'm unilaterally stopping the contest now~ i'm just pointing out today's the day
― BIG HOOS aka the steendriver, Wednesday, 1 October 2014 15:40 (nine years ago) link
gonna have to bank mine for next year's since it's not quite done and i have approx 20 hrs of work to do today
― ciderpress, Wednesday, 1 October 2014 15:43 (nine years ago) link
xpost: ok, gotcha
― disinclination loops (unregistered), Wednesday, 1 October 2014 16:23 (nine years ago) link
no pressure now
― zero content albums (darraghmac), Wednesday, 1 October 2014 16:47 (nine years ago) link
before i sleep i'm going to type something up directly into this box and submit it (well, if i think it has a prayer against dmac's, otherwise nah)
― Ƹ༑Ʒ (imago), Wednesday, 1 October 2014 21:15 (nine years ago) link
dmac set a damned high bar, but I say he needs us as foils, so it would only be polite to oblige him by setting his stuff next to our lesser stuff that sets his off to best advantage.
― Aimless, Wednesday, 1 October 2014 22:48 (nine years ago) link
Against Complete Withdrawal
negotiation phase
on soft sunny fading days and through peoplecling on, sour godhead
but in frantic aspirationand to these eventsfeign lively boredom
for the mill-ground teethof conversations declinedframe instability a corrective
crisis phase
categorical suicidezones and their gerundive 'must be withdrawn from'
however hover kneebentfor dysphoric relapse: fire wilts at the joint
thrown down inmy own ashunwoven loving
renegotiation phase
a little further back from corneal immediacyspaceless ambitions
recover absent breathleave sensors responsive heart sceneries dead slow
i am here butthere are conditionsand a terminal door
― Ƹ༑Ʒ (imago), Wednesday, 1 October 2014 23:51 (nine years ago) link
I like that
XP i pity the foil
― zero content albums (darraghmac), Thursday, 2 October 2014 07:12 (nine years ago) link
pity the foil is ace
― BIG HOOS aka the steendriver, Thursday, 2 October 2014 15:59 (nine years ago) link
ok bluds in the next day or so i will put all of these into a new thread with voting opciones
― BIG HOOS aka the steendriver, Thursday, 2 October 2014 20:04 (nine years ago) link
.
― zero content albums (darraghmac), Sunday, 5 October 2014 10:44 (nine years ago) link
?
― lool at the herrlich (wins), Sunday, 5 October 2014 11:17 (nine years ago) link
deems did you miss the voting thread or something?
yeah srsly
grats on 2nd place tho
― Ƹ༑Ʒ (imago), Sunday, 5 October 2014 11:24 (nine years ago) link
I've been on a rock with no internet it was magnificent tbh hi btw
― zero content albums (darraghmac), Sunday, 5 October 2014 11:28 (nine years ago) link
Bummer contendo couldnt have caught this year's bus
― its a kirt not a skilt (Drugs A. Money), Sunday, 5 October 2014 11:36 (nine years ago) link
hi! that's no way to talk about new york xp
― Ƹ༑Ʒ (imago), Sunday, 5 October 2014 11:36 (nine years ago) link
8080 rock
― zero content albums (darraghmac), Sunday, 5 October 2014 11:42 (nine years ago) link
hi guys sorry for my tardiness, busy weekend--can work on this shortly!
― BIG HOOS aka the steendriver, Monday, 6 October 2014 03:07 (nine years ago) link
remember when we used to do these
― Mordy, Thursday, 26 September 2019 20:53 (four years ago) link
bring that beat back imo
― imago, Thursday, 26 September 2019 22:43 (four years ago) link
we useta write things in this country.
now everyones got his hand in the other guys pocketbook.
― all over bar the shouting (im here for the shouting) (darraghmac), Thursday, 26 September 2019 22:52 (four years ago) link
i'm already running a poll atm. someone else should start a thread!
― imago, Thursday, 26 September 2019 22:56 (four years ago) link
I'm away from home rn, but when I get back I may launch a 2019 Poetry Contest, if no one has done so already.
― A is for (Aimless), Friday, 27 September 2019 01:35 (four years ago) link
^do it! It's National Poetry Day in the UK...
― imago, Thursday, 3 October 2019 12:24 (four years ago) link
TS: Simon Armitage vs Rupi Kaur
Who pens the trvest poëtree?
― pomenitul, Thursday, 3 October 2019 12:28 (four years ago) link
always wisest to remember though rough winds doth shake the darling buds of maysoon comes novemberand dont no-one give a fuck about national poetry day
― all over bar the shouting (im here for the shouting) (darraghmac), Thursday, 3 October 2019 12:40 (four years ago) link
i'm game...!
― blue light or electric light (the table is the table), Thursday, 3 October 2019 15:12 (four years ago) link
OK. I did it.
2019 ILX Poetry Competition: Open Division
― A is for (Aimless), Thursday, 3 October 2019 18:16 (four years ago) link