Is J. Alfred Prufrock insecure?

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I'm not sure I agree with your reading of an arm "downed with light brown hair" as a "defect." I think the narrator more likely considers it attractive.

Hurting (Hurting), Wednesday, 10 August 2005 00:01 (eighteen years ago) link

And I think the "damned soul" content is a metaphor for his state in his actual, mundane existence, not the other way around.

Hurting (Hurting), Wednesday, 10 August 2005 00:04 (eighteen years ago) link

Mark, you realize the poem works despite all that "ontological" claptrap, and not because of it, right?

Casuistry (Chris P), Wednesday, 10 August 2005 06:42 (eighteen years ago) link

Oh my gosh! Peaches!

youn, Wednesday, 10 August 2005 10:43 (eighteen years ago) link

Good luck on your thesis anyway Mark.

Hurting (Hurting), Wednesday, 10 August 2005 14:59 (eighteen years ago) link

Obviously the narrator does not consider the hair attractive...note the fact that the sentence is parenthetical, starts with "But" and ends with an exclamation point.

The ontology is what the poem is about, and thus is obviously what makes it.

Mark Adkins
msadkins04@yahoo.com

Mark Adkins, Wednesday, 10 August 2005 22:57 (eighteen years ago) link

Obviously the poem is not about mundane existence, as would be obvious to anyone who has read it. (I exclude non-sentients, because they are not anyone.) Do you really think the narrator has "wept and fasted, wept and prayed" over whether he's going to eat a peach (literally or figuratively)? How absurdly shallow you are. Go away, morons.


Mark Adkins
msadkins04@yahoo.com

Mark Adkins, Wednesday, 10 August 2005 23:00 (eighteen years ago) link

Now, the poem seems pretty obsessed with "mundane existance", and this seems to be where many of the narrator's anxieties lie: There are etherized patients, cheap hotels, restaurants littered with sawdust and oyster shells, yellow oozing fog, tongues licking, standing water, soot-filled chimneys, make up, toast and tea, stairs to walk down, bald spots, coats, neckties, and tie pins, thin arms and legs, endless cups of coffee and cigarettes, hairy arms, crabs, tea, cakes, and ices, not to mention marmalade and porcelain, doorways and novels and light shows and pillows and trousers and hairstyles and peaches! Some of these things are refined and some are decadant, and the inability for the refined things to stave off the decadant seems to be one of the main themes of the poem: Hence the refined white arms proving to have their vulgar little hairs; the reaction is not obviously revulsion nor is it necessarily lust, just more confirmation that all the refinement in the world will not keep you from all the vulgarities in the world, and certainly not from that ultimate vulgarity, death.

That is much more present in the poem than a few tossed off allusions to Dante.

Casuistry (Chris P), Wednesday, 10 August 2005 23:25 (eighteen years ago) link

DNFTT

as it clung to her thigh I started to cry (pr00de), Wednesday, 10 August 2005 23:29 (eighteen years ago) link

Do not feed the thesis, I know.

Casuistry (Chris P), Wednesday, 10 August 2005 23:37 (eighteen years ago) link

Obviously the narrator does not consider the hair attractive...note the fact that the sentence is parenthetical, starts with "But" and ends with an exclamation point.

I'm not sure this is so "obvious." Prufrock was written in 1917. According to various articles I'm finding on the net, body hair removal didn't become popular among women until the 1920s. So it's hard to understand why the narrator would be disgusted by a little arm hair (not to mention that it could have a subtle sexual undertone) -- also, the word "downed" sounds pleasant enough to me.

Hurting (Hurting), Thursday, 11 August 2005 03:46 (eighteen years ago) link

That aside, of course all of the ontological stuff is there, but the poem takes place very much in the world of people and things. To deny that is to be purposefuly obtuse (the purpose, of course, being to cultivate an original and authoritative-sounding opinion).

Hurting (Hurting), Thursday, 11 August 2005 04:09 (eighteen years ago) link

I don't think it's a reference to body hair removal so much as being unlike classical statues (or perhaps classical descriptions of women? -- mentioning arm hair, even downy hair, seems like a 20th C. innovation, but that is just a guess).

Casuistry (Chris P), Thursday, 11 August 2005 05:12 (eighteen years ago) link

The more I look at that line, I'm actually not sure whether he's enthralled or appalled by the hair. Maybe both?

Hurting (Hurting), Thursday, 11 August 2005 05:16 (eighteen years ago) link

I think Casuistry's right on, that the hair's a sign of, like, an actual person, not an idea. It's easy enough to idealize the braceleted, white, bare arms, I guess, since to me that description implies a certain amount of distance. You can see all that from afar, but the hair suggests something more intimate, not only in terms of space -- he'd have to be much closer to her to notice something like that -- but emotionally or romantically.

as it clung to her thigh I started to cry (pr00de), Thursday, 11 August 2005 05:45 (eighteen years ago) link

biography of sexual nympholeptic john ruskin

Josh (Josh), Thursday, 11 August 2005 05:55 (eighteen years ago) link

BAD luck on yr thesis, ASSHOLE

John (jdahlem), Thursday, 11 August 2005 13:33 (eighteen years ago) link

The great thing about the arm-hair isn't thrall but this sense of discovery -- the exclamation point at the end makes it seem as if he's still in some state of wonder about the mere fact of women, the "secret" nuances of them. The exclamation point creates this massive distance, some sort of display-case screen. I first had to reach this at maybe 14, and something about that resonated -- it's nearly shades of the 12-year-old boy who walks around mind-blown because "every one of these women around me, under their clothes, they have vaginas! they're all around! they don't even care, they have access to them everyday, it's not even a big deal to them!"

I too always connected the peach with the downy-arms. I have personal associations with the peach thing, too: I have this massive fruit-phobia that really takes shames with peaches. So Archel, I love that you put "risk" on the peach-association list, because that's 90% of what I get out of them -- they're so rarely ideally ripe, and when they're not, they're quite disgusting, and so biting into one is a huge gamble of pleasant possibilities vs. grainy or mushy or god-forbid wormy ... So it's always made sense to me on some intuitive level that it'd be a peach. Peaches are a big leap.

I mean, alternately, it could be an Allman Brothers reference.

nabisco (nabisco), Thursday, 11 August 2005 16:31 (eighteen years ago) link

I was bummed when the Allman thing was debunked.

k/l (Ken L), Thursday, 11 August 2005 16:34 (eighteen years ago) link

I think it's rather curious that my posts here have not been archived by Google. In fact, so far as I can see, all of the posts up to mine are archived, but mine isn't, nor are those afterward which address mine (though I didn't systematically check all of the latter). A Web search for "ilx "i love books" diachronic pooftah" (interior quotes included in the search string) turns up a hit for this Q&A thread, but neither my email address (contained in full in the text) nor words particular to my reply, result in a hit when added to the search string.

Mark Adkins
msadkins04@yahoo.com

Mark Adkins, Thursday, 11 August 2005 18:58 (eighteen years ago) link

I guess Google doesn't update the entire web every five minutes, as you seem to think, but rather checks modestly popular sites such as ILX only every few days or weeks.

Casuistry (Chris P), Thursday, 11 August 2005 19:04 (eighteen years ago) link

Chris, maybe you can use your newfound moderator powers to change that.

k/l (Ken L), Thursday, 11 August 2005 19:20 (eighteen years ago) link

chris write to google and tell them. write in longhand and use a fountain pen.

jed_ (jed), Thursday, 11 August 2005 19:57 (eighteen years ago) link

Mark = Marissa Marchant???

Hurting (Hurting), Thursday, 11 August 2005 20:08 (eighteen years ago) link

The ILB equivalent.

k/l (Ken L), Thursday, 11 August 2005 20:24 (eighteen years ago) link

Abstract of my article "Eliot contra Prog Rock: 'The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock' and the Politics of Punk Rock"

In a recent interview, noted contemporary poet David Berman claims that TS Eliot's seminal modernist poem "The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock" is the "Stairway to Heaven" of twentieth century. In fact, the ontological intention behind the poem could be nothing further from this assessment. While Berman's rockist assertion aligns Prufrock with the more or less progressive rock band Led Zeppelin, Eliot instead meant his poem to stand as orphic warning about the evils of progressive rock. Eliot offers Prufrock as a prophetic allegory of the aging prog rock movement whose increasingly banal self-regard betrays the moral bankruptcy of their chief appeal: arrogant virtuosity. In this article I demostrate that Eliot's elliptical lines forecast the minimalism of punk even as Prufrock himself is autopsized as a somnambulent dinosaur prog rock corpse.

Nobodaddy, Thursday, 11 August 2005 23:56 (eighteen years ago) link

Abstract of my article "Eliot contra Prog Rock: 'The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock' and the Politics of Punk Rock"

In a recent interview, noted contemporary poet David Berman claims that TS Eliot's seminal modernist poem "The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock" is the "Stairway to Heaven" of twentieth century American poetry. In fact, the ontological intention behind the poem could be nothing further from this assessment. While Berman's rockist assertion aligns Prufrock with the more or less progressive rock band Led Zeppelin, Eliot instead meant his poem to stand as orphic warning about the evils of progressive rock. Eliot offers Prufrock as a prophetic allegory of the aging prog rock movement whose increasingly banal self-regard betrays the moral bankruptcy of their chief appeal: arrogant virtuosity. In this article I demostrate that Eliot's elliptical lines forecast the minimalism of punk even as Prufrock himself is autopsized as a somnambulent dinosaur prog rock corpse.

Nobodaddy, Thursday, 11 August 2005 23:57 (eighteen years ago) link

Sorry about the double post! There should be an editing function here. "Eliot proffers Prufrock" even.

Nobodaddy, Thursday, 11 August 2005 23:59 (eighteen years ago) link

There's a lady who's sure all that glitters is gold, but sometimes it's just yellow smoke.

as it clung to her thigh I started to cry (pr00de), Friday, 12 August 2005 00:27 (eighteen years ago) link

In the room the women come and go
Talking of Michelangelo (Matos)

as it clung to her thigh I started to cry (pr00de), Friday, 12 August 2005 00:29 (eighteen years ago) link

If there's a mermaid in the water, don't be alarmed now.

Casuistry (Chris P), Friday, 12 August 2005 02:33 (eighteen years ago) link

"Prufrock! Prufrock!"

Hurting (Hurting), Friday, 12 August 2005 03:11 (eighteen years ago) link

Obviously the narrator does not consider the hair attractive...note the fact that the sentence is parenthetical, starts with "But" and ends with an exclamation point.

I think, like others above, that this is only one (probably 'wrong') interpretation. To me the exclamation mark is revelation, not dismay. And yes, nabisco, I totally associate the peach with the fuzz of arm hair too. It's not so much a defect as something that is always there but not always revealed, it's the exciting and tactile reality/corporality as opposed to the mere surface.

Archel (Archel), Friday, 12 August 2005 08:19 (eighteen years ago) link

The Folk Song Of J Alfred Pinefox

k/l (Ken L), Friday, 12 August 2005 09:44 (eighteen years ago) link

And as we wind on, you and I,
the sun is taller than the sky,
there is a lady we both know,
and in the room she comes and goes,
and when I catch her in the hall,
"That is not what I meant at all!"
I should have been a pair of CLAW-AWS (yeah!)
Grow old and wear my trousers ROLLED!

Hurting (Hurting), Friday, 12 August 2005 11:19 (eighteen years ago) link

That's HI-larious! Almost as good as "Stairway to Gilligan." Better maybe.

k/l (Ken L), Friday, 12 August 2005 12:19 (eighteen years ago) link

I should have had a grassband girlfriend
Playing banjo in the key of C

k/l (Ken L), Friday, 12 August 2005 18:08 (eighteen years ago) link

bango

jaymc (jaymc), Friday, 12 August 2005 21:57 (eighteen years ago) link

This is a great thread, btw. I should read ILB more. Actually I should read B more first. But it's inspired me to dig out my Eliot volume, at least.

jaymc (jaymc), Friday, 12 August 2005 21:58 (eighteen years ago) link

Nice, k!

Hurting (Hurting), Saturday, 13 August 2005 03:31 (eighteen years ago) link

Chris, If it is obvious to me, then it is obvious to everyone here that your educational credentials are woefully inadequate for the moderation of this board. I suggest you resign immediately and turn over the keys to one of the recently arrived eggheads.

Hurting, do you have your "show LoChris, If it is obvious to me, then it is obvious to everyone that your educational credentials are woefully inadequate for the moderation of this board. I suggest you resign immediately and turn over the keys to one of the recently arrived eggheads.

Hurting, do you have your "show Username" option checked?

k/l (Ken L), Saturday, 13 August 2005 03:48 (eighteen years ago) link

When cut and paste goes wrong.

Anyway, just joshing, Chris.
Just kidding, Josh.

k/l (Ken L), Saturday, 13 August 2005 03:49 (eighteen years ago) link

Nabisco hits the mark again.

the bellefox, Monday, 15 August 2005 12:30 (eighteen years ago) link

oh please

John (jdahlem), Monday, 15 August 2005 12:45 (eighteen years ago) link

ok he did nm

John (jdahlem), Monday, 15 August 2005 12:46 (eighteen years ago) link

"The Love Song Remains The Same"

David A. (Davant), Wednesday, 17 August 2005 05:27 (eighteen years ago) link

one month passes...
"Casuistry" (now *there's* truth in product labelling) wrote:

"The poem seems pretty obsessed with 'mundane existance', and this
seems to be where many of the narrator's anxieties lie: There are ...oyster shells...standing water, soot-filled chimneys, make up, toast and tea, stairs to walk down...coats, neckties, and tie pins..."

What an amusing misrepresentation. It's as if a robot, asked to comment on the meaning of a play, reeled off a list of the props.

Casuistry: "[These things are] much more present in the poem than a few tossed off allusions to Dante."

Those things are the outer trappings, the background, like props in a play. The quote from Dante occupies a prominent place at the start of the poem precisely because it foreshadows the poem's content.

The rest of your comments are equally inane and I shall ignore them.

Mark Adkins, Friday, 14 October 2005 14:58 (eighteen years ago) link

It's as if a robot, asked to comment on the meaning of a play, reeled off a list of the props.
Gold star for robotboy!

k/l (Ken L), Friday, 14 October 2005 16:07 (eighteen years ago) link

...

tom west (thomp), Friday, 14 October 2005 17:27 (eighteen years ago) link

You're right: The fact that Eliot fills his text up with mundane, human, realistic details is a clear indication that we are to dismiss those details as mere props and assume that Prufrock is some sort of metaphysical starbaby, living in some abstracted plane and wrestling with inner daemons daring him to actually manipulate the matter of the universe, to be involved with the real world once again.

Hm, I'm beginning to understand why this interpretation appeals to you!

Anyway, mostly I'm pleased that you took the time to elide my quote in a seemingly random but time-consuming fashion.

Casuistry (Chris P), Friday, 14 October 2005 17:52 (eighteen years ago) link


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