Have we talked about Oblivion, the new David Foster Wallace, at all?

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[continued G.O.N. spoilage ahoy]
Yeah, I regret that "painful and limp", it's glib and unhelpful. (I actually meant the Sudden Reversal by "fourth-wall bustin'", which was a terrible term for it, too).

Thing is, at least for me re: GON is that when I got to that bit yes I reeled, and yes it /is/ a virtuoso writing performance but that somehow didn't feel like enough. It's too cold and clever and studied, and I kinda spend the whole time I spend reading DFW mentally defending him from charges of being too cold and clever and studied etc. But maybe that's just because different experiences, the suicide thing resonating for you, and fair play. For me it had the same flaws as The Depressed Person from BITWM, that kinda 'DO YOU SEE' quality.

This is maybe why I found 'The Soul Is Not A Smithy' so great, actually, because you just can't keep that warmth out of a story with kids in, not matter what the subject, the same way 'The Secret Integration' is like automatically the warmest thing Pynchon ever wrote? (I'm not saying the best obv).

(I realise this totally contradicts what I said abt TSINAS being evidence of progress upthread...)

Gregory Henry (Gregory Henry), Wednesday, 25 August 2004 23:31 (nineteen years ago) link

I'd actually totally love you to convince me wrong on GON, I don't want to seem all harsh and dismissive and parade-pissin'! Sorry if it came across like that.

Gregory Henry (Gregory Henry), Wednesday, 25 August 2004 23:34 (nineteen years ago) link

No, it didn't come across like that at all. (On a side note, I'm quite pleased to finally be talking about this story. I first read it 2 years ago but never had a chance to talk about it. But now it occurs to me that reviews of Oblivion must abound and certainly some will mention GON -- I wonder what they say.)

I empathize with you about "mentally defending him from charges of being too cold and clever and studied". Reading Everything And More, his book about Cantor and the study of infinity, I grew quite frustrated with his writing. He really goes to town with this whole using clever abbreviations and non-alphabetical characters shtick; it impeded my comprehension of some of the mathematical stuff, and for what purpose? It felt like an affectation, like he was just putting on airs.

I guess GON transcended those kinds of concerns for me at the time I read it because I was so impressed and absorbed by it; I bought it, hook, line, and sinker. When I read it a second time a few months ago, it held up (and I enjoyed very much anticipating the reversal and going through it as slowly as I could to see how he did it -- the first time I read it, I just zipped through at light speed because I was so *into* it) although I suspect I will only want to read it again after a few more years have passed and maybe not for a long time after that -- there is a certain one-trick pony-ness to it, but what a trick! So I'm defending it, but not claiming it's like canon-worthy, necessarily. If I had the text I would be able to point out more specific bits of the writing that I find worthy of admiration. I haven't read THSINAS or The Secret Integration so I can't compare them.

So I guess my defense of GON is that I was sufficiently affected that it disarmed my DFW Airs Dectector, but I also can imagine many people would find my detector set far too forgiving. I doubt that will convince anyone to like this story who didn't already. But I wonder, who are other authors/what are other stories that have displayed this sort of virtusoity? I would very much like to read them. I seem to like this sort of thing. And I wonder if it's possible to read such *without* having to disarm the Airs Dectector...

comme personne (common_person), Thursday, 26 August 2004 14:47 (nineteen years ago) link

Re: "Sissy-nah" or whatever: Well, you know, I really enjoyed the puns and the cleverness and the twistiness of it. And the challenge of the orthography. It's been a while since I read it, and it's not as if I was enraptured by it, so I don't remember it perfectly well. But yes.

Casuistry (Chris P), Thursday, 26 August 2004 17:58 (nineteen years ago) link

Whereas, like, "Year of the Depends Adult Undergarment" never struck me as actually what you'd call "funny".

Casuistry (Chris P), Thursday, 26 August 2004 17:59 (nineteen years ago) link

I just read the title story. It's pretty unreadably boring for like thirty pages, and then right at the end it switches to not making that much sense, and it's probably the most staggering, accomplished, jolt-bolt-upright, what-the-hell-was-THAT piece of writing I've read in like at least a year and I haven't really been able to sleep for two nights.

Gregory Henry (Gregory Henry), Wednesday, 1 September 2004 02:41 (nineteen years ago) link

Hokey twist, but then you could say the same for "Mulholland Drive"

Neil Willett (Neil Willett), Thursday, 2 September 2004 18:52 (nineteen years ago) link

Sorry, "hokey's" the wrong word, in fact a very simplistic and off-the-mark word to deploy here, but Any Wallace story that actually HAS "an ending" as opposed to "an end" can seem relatively, disarmingly, conventional.

Neil Willett (Neil Willett), Thursday, 2 September 2004 18:59 (nineteen years ago) link

Haha, yeah, how many Lynch references were there in that story? I like lost count.

Gregory Henry (Gregory Henry), Friday, 3 September 2004 10:44 (nineteen years ago) link

>Sorry, "hokey's" the wrong word, in fact a very simplistic and off-the-mark word to deploy here, but Any Wallace story that actually HAS "an ending" as opposed to "an end" can seem relatively, disarmingly, conventional.

I don't know if I'd agree about oblivion's ending, though! To me "an ending" implies closure and finality and stuff - Oblivion seems to end the way say < wanker> Shakespeare's Troilus ends < /wanker>, with the contagion blowing out into the rest of the world. It's not like the ending is even chronologically final...

Gregory Henry (Gregory Henry), Friday, 3 September 2004 16:49 (nineteen years ago) link

I'm really starting to think that it's an amazing collection.

Gregory Henry (Gregory Henry), Friday, 3 September 2004 16:50 (nineteen years ago) link

I would still half like him to write something good, again.

Gregory Henry (Gregory Henry), Friday, 3 September 2004 16:52 (nineteen years ago) link

But I could settle. If he keeps getting better at this other thing, like this.

Gregory Henry (Gregory Henry), Friday, 3 September 2004 16:54 (nineteen years ago) link

two months pass...
More speculation on the end of "Oblivion," pls.

jaymc (jaymc), Friday, 12 November 2004 18:28 (nineteen years ago) link

It's a sort of collapse? Of chronology and memory and like sense really, all backing away from this total total horror. It is amazing and shocking and beautiful, I never ever want to read it again.

I think it might do things with The Suffering Channel, because I get the impression that Oblivion (the book) is an interlaced sorta thing, it paces itself, but I couldn't read TSC, I am too squeamish, ugh.

Gravel Puzzleworth (Gregory Henry), Sunday, 14 November 2004 04:13 (nineteen years ago) link

What did you think, Jay?

Gravel Puzzleworth (Gregory Henry), Sunday, 14 November 2004 04:13 (nineteen years ago) link

I am a recovering Wallace-addict - in college I read Infinite Jest three times, pen in hand, and aside from his book on infinity (in which I couldn't get past page 50) I think I've read everything he's published. So my responses to him now are a little fuzzed by nostalgia and over-familiarity. While I was reading Oblivion I loved it, but in retrospect it has diminished and diminished until now, if someone asks, I'll say, "Oh, don't bother." I'm not sure why this is. Throughout his career he's had this thing about being deliberately irritating - the tic about clarifying all the pronouns with parentheses, the non-endings, the footnotes, the acronyms - and finally, with Oblivion, I feel fed up. He's too talented and too smart to utterly disregard the reader's experience; to be, at times, hostile to the reader. Did anybody read his review of the Borges bio in the New York Times Book Review the other week? The footnotes really have come to feel to me like a tic, and are now unpleasant to see just as it's unpleasant to see someone pick at his skin or bite his nails. When he escapes his paralyzing self-consciousness, his ticcishness - as in a few places in Infinite Jest and A Supposedly Fun Thing - he is, I think, the best living American writer. More talented than Roth, smarter than Pynchon, capable of language more beautiful than Updike.
I have a couple of questions about Oblivion, both of which will prompt spoilers, so I apologize:
-What exactly was the twist at the end of "Good Old Neon"? I know he brought himself into the story's frame, but I couldn't quite understand who ended up being the narrator. The dead guy's spirit? Or was it David Foster Wallace all along?
-What happened at the end of "Oblivion"? I haven't seen any David Lynch movies, so I gather that I missed a bunch of references along the way, but I was following along happily until that very final scene. Was it all a dream? I just didn't get it, and I've read in a few reviews about the "mind-blowing twist."

David Elinsky (David Elinsky), Sunday, 14 November 2004 05:18 (nineteen years ago) link

There's an insightful review in the current LRB: http://www.lrb.co.uk/v26/n22/maso02_.html

Jerry the Nipper (Jerrynipper), Monday, 15 November 2004 16:55 (nineteen years ago) link

That article started out very promising, connecting Tense Present's conclusions with his published output. Too bad I had to stop when the Oblivion exegesis began since I haven't yet read it.

W i l l (common_person), Monday, 15 November 2004 18:16 (nineteen years ago) link

That's astonishing!

Gravel Puzzleworth (Gregory Henry), Tuesday, 16 November 2004 12:37 (nineteen years ago) link

Like easily the best thing on Wallace I've read.

Gravel Puzzleworth (Gregory Henry), Tuesday, 16 November 2004 12:38 (nineteen years ago) link

I am not sure I /quite/ buy his take on the ending. But then: I am not sure I quite buy the ending people always give to Mulholland Drive, which seems a related thing. I mean, IJ gives a whole bunch of plausible narratives for the gap between end and beginning, and it'd be pretty harsh not to say that was on purpose; I think "a key" or "a twist" (Good Old Neon etc) is a misleading image when a writer is consciously choosing to close without answers, with a rush towards the light that allows and encourages wonder. I do actually agree with DE abt "being deliberately annoying" but I don't think the non-endings are really part of it.

Gravel Puzzleworth (Gregory Henry), Tuesday, 16 November 2004 12:46 (nineteen years ago) link

A big part of the reason I found oblivion so powerful is maybe that you can sorta sketch out a stencil for a lot of DFW's ending, like where this complexity builds and builds until it attained some sort of absolute through just this, like a piece of paper so covered in writing that it's simply black. (The chalkboard in 'The Soul Is Not A Smithy' uses this exact image I think?). This happens in Forever Overhead ("Hello.") and it happens in IJ with that amazing line about the tide, and it happens a whole whole lot in the stories in Oblivion, that "clean white slate" in Mr. Squishy after all those nested & nested betrayals, that "which is good" in um, I've forgotten the title, I don't have the book here, the one with the beatles? And when you get to Oblivion (which is why I talk abt it being paced, as a collection), and you get to that ending, after all that complexity, and instead of all that you get this image of oblivion (that's elsewhere this friendly absolute/nothing) as so utterly, infinitely horrible, well, that's where the kick is, for me. And that's why I'm hostile to appraising it as a key, or a twist.

Gravel Puzzleworth (Gregory Henry), Tuesday, 16 November 2004 13:04 (nineteen years ago) link

(I couldn't get past page 50 of the maths book either, even though someone explained Cantor's diagonal proof to me at a party this weekend and I thought it was beautiful and cool, so I increasingly think it's just not very well written, at least in terms of being a maths textbook)

Gravel Puzzleworth (Gregory Henry), Tuesday, 16 November 2004 13:10 (nineteen years ago) link

Ooh: I have not opened that LRB yet, naturally.

the bellefox, Tuesday, 16 November 2004 17:06 (nineteen years ago) link

(The infinity book was almost intolerable. I finished it but all the excitement I'd felt on anticipating reading DFW on Cantor/infinity was sapped. In addition to copious footnotage, he goes to town with non-alphanumeric characters and all his other tics.)

W i l l (common_person), Tuesday, 16 November 2004 18:43 (nineteen years ago) link

i don't understand what's so horrifying about that ending. postmodern fiction is bollocks.

John (jdahlem), Tuesday, 16 November 2004 20:25 (nineteen years ago) link

eight months pass...
i just finished reading this.

[POTENTIAL SPOILaGe of Suffering Channel]


Q: so is mrs. moltke an evil mastermind?

Q: what's in the other duplex-half?!

i know i'm going to have nightmares tonight.

gabe (gabe), Friday, 22 July 2005 01:26 (eighteen years ago) link

i can't remember enough to answer those two questions, but i did think the suffering channel was my least favorite thing there, like the last thing in his other collection of stories (i mean, not 'interviews', which isn't really a collection of stories as such), because it seemed distended in similar ways. also "a 9/11 story" and "humour based on the mockery of obese people" are both on my list of Things David Foster Wallace Ought To Do Better Than.

tom west (thomp), Friday, 22 July 2005 15:11 (eighteen years ago) link

i don't know if i even made it halfway thru suffering channel.

another reason wallace is a douche: cuz he left ISU to for rich socal preps at pomona. not that i blame him.

John (jdahlem), Friday, 22 July 2005 18:13 (eighteen years ago) link

i don't understand your last line there.

tom west (thomp), Saturday, 23 July 2005 15:11 (eighteen years ago) link

eleven years pass...

tried revisiting Good Old Neon today but couldn't do it. too brutal. so sorely missed. after trying for 9 years to get through Infinite Jest i finished it last night. took four months. re-read the first chapter immediately and my brain is still dripping out my ear

flappy bird, Monday, 12 September 2016 23:31 (seven years ago) link


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