Is J. Alfred Prufrock insecure?

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For the most part, I agree. However, I do think there's some reason he chose "peach" and not, say "potato." Peaches are sweet and juicy and pleasurable I think it's obvious that Prufrock is bemoaning the onset of old age in general and not just a few specific things he won't be able to do. I don't think he's just saying "Old age is going to suck because I won't be able to eat peaches, which are my favorite fruit, and I'll have to roll up my trousers as my bones shrink."

Hurting (Hurting), Tuesday, 26 April 2005 23:38 (nineteen years ago) link

also potato doesn't rhyme with beach. i kid!

but also the peach skin maybe refers back to

and i have known the arms already, known them all--
arms that are braceleted and white and bare
(but in the lamplight downed with light brown hair!)

jed_ (jed), Tuesday, 26 April 2005 23:43 (nineteen years ago) link

oh i mean that's not a given - i'm just asking if any of you thnk it does?

jed_ (jed), Tuesday, 26 April 2005 23:44 (nineteen years ago) link

Hmm. That doesn't seem out of the question, and it's at very least interesting.

Hurting (Hurting), Tuesday, 26 April 2005 23:52 (nineteen years ago) link

I may have to go back to my old stickler-for-close-reading English professor and ask him about the indigestion thing. I really like the loose/false teeth reading much better -- the vivid image of him biting into a peach and losing a tooth as opposed to just not feeling so well later on.

Hurting (Hurting), Tuesday, 26 April 2005 23:54 (nineteen years ago) link

It'd be nice if there were more threads like this on ILB, threads wherein specific lines or passages are discussed in detail.

Hurting (Hurting), Tuesday, 26 April 2005 23:56 (nineteen years ago) link

yeah this has turned into a good thread.

jed_ (jed), Wednesday, 27 April 2005 00:00 (nineteen years ago) link

I'm not entirely sure you can justify any answer with the text, but how old do you assume Prufrock is?

I've always assumed he's about Eliot's age was when he wrote the poem: 22.

Casuistry (Chris P), Wednesday, 27 April 2005 02:39 (nineteen years ago) link

i always with the peach, he was worried about juice running down his chin and robbing him of his brittle dignity.

debden, Wednesday, 27 April 2005 07:38 (nineteen years ago) link

i mean, whoever got indigestion after eating a peach? and how can you 'lose a tooth' if you're wearing dentures?

debden, Wednesday, 27 April 2005 07:39 (nineteen years ago) link

Well, that might also be true!

Casuistry (Chris P), Wednesday, 27 April 2005 07:52 (nineteen years ago) link

The exciting thing is that it doesn't matter why he's worried about the peach. What matters is that peaches are pathetic things to be worried about "daring" to eat, and of course the pleasing patterns of sounds in "do I dare to eat a peach?"

Casuistry (Chris P), Wednesday, 27 April 2005 07:53 (nineteen years ago) link

I am surprised at the alleged sexual connotations of peaches on this thread. I have never thought that they have any.

the bellefox, Wednesday, 27 April 2005 09:11 (nineteen years ago) link

!!!

Ken L (Ken L), Wednesday, 27 April 2005 09:27 (nineteen years ago) link

PF you are strange.

I'm sure there's a whole dissertation to be written about peaches in literature/popular culture cf Prufrock, Jimmy Corrigan, James and the Giant Peach, The Stranglers, um, the Presidents of the United States of America. Etc.

Archel (Archel), Wednesday, 27 April 2005 09:42 (nineteen years ago) link

Basically, peaches are good. As is sex. (OK not sure where Roald Dahl fits in re. the sexual symbolism, and not sure I want to think about it either.)

Archel (Archel), Wednesday, 27 April 2005 09:44 (nineteen years ago) link

I never actually raised any explicit sexual connotations for peach. I said "symbolism" and someone else immediately assumed that was what I meant and vigorously denied it.

i mean, whoever got indigestion after eating a peach? and how can you 'lose a tooth' if you're wearing dentures?

Right, well I think it's either losing one tooth, or having dentures and having them come out (which is why fixodent was invented). I'm not sure which.

Hurting (Hurting), Wednesday, 27 April 2005 13:36 (nineteen years ago) link

I'm not entirely sure you can justify any answer with the text, but how old do you assume Prufrock is?

I've always assumed he's about Eliot's age was when he wrote the poem: 22.

-- Casuistry (chri...), April 27th, 2005.

Well, I think it's a very bad idea to assume that the speaker of a poem, especially one by someone like Eliot, is the author or the same age (or race, or gender, or in the same time period) as the author.

I actually imagined him maybe in his 30s or 40s -- old enough to be worrying about old age but not feeling the effects yet.

Hurting (Hurting), Wednesday, 27 April 2005 13:38 (nineteen years ago) link

Archel, I don't know all your examples. As you say, R Dahl's peach is not sexual anyway - and that is as it should be.

I have never seen sexuality in Prufrock's peach. Also, I think he is older than 22. Say 37.

the bellefox, Wednesday, 27 April 2005 13:57 (nineteen years ago) link

Well I guess I see messiness and sensuality and abandon and risk, more than sex per se.

But come on:
http://www.christinespies.com/images/peach.jpg

Archel (Archel), Wednesday, 27 April 2005 14:09 (nineteen years ago) link

I guess he's old enough to fear ageing without being old enough to know what old age really feels like.

Archel (Archel), Wednesday, 27 April 2005 14:11 (nineteen years ago) link

http://www.bbc.co.uk/collective/dnaimages/030912/peaches.jpg

Jordan (Jordan), Wednesday, 27 April 2005 14:19 (nineteen years ago) link

If you don't want any of my peaches, Pinefox, please don't mess around my tree.

Casuistry (Chris P), Wednesday, 27 April 2005 15:29 (nineteen years ago) link

Prufrock may be more alienated than insecure: he seems to be kind of appalled by the chattering ladies gabbing on about Michaelangelo and ignoring him while measuring out life with coffee-spoons, and I think that links in with the mermaids who he doesn't think will sing to him. Maybe he doesn't want them to but would be secretly gratified if they did lionise him like the latest Russian pianist or whatever.

Liz :x (Liz :x), Thursday, 28 April 2005 14:58 (nineteen years ago) link

I wish some Old Blue would dig up a copy of the parody "Prufrock at Morse Motown" and send it my way.

Ken L (Ken L), Thursday, 28 April 2005 16:16 (nineteen years ago) link

Prufrock may be more alienated than insecure: he seems to be kind of appalled by the chattering ladies gabbing on about Michaelangelo and ignoring him while measuring out life with coffee-spoons, and I think that links in with the mermaids who he doesn't think will sing to him. Maybe he doesn't want them to but would be secretly gratified if they did lionise him like the latest Russian pianist or whatever.

-- Liz :x (lizd4ply...), April 28th, 2005.

Maybe he's a bit alienated, but he's mainly paralyzed by indecision. Though I do think he has a certain amount of contempt for the chatter about Michaelangelo, but part of that also comes out of fear of coming across well at these social gatherings.

Hurting (Hurting), Friday, 29 April 2005 01:43 (nineteen years ago) link

singsong decorous love not not dying. TAs in the sciences are much better.

youn, Friday, 29 April 2005 11:42 (nineteen years ago) link

(sorry)

youn, Friday, 29 April 2005 11:54 (nineteen years ago) link

All the TAs I had in science and math classes only managed to confuse students and muddle things up (passing off incorrect or incomplete information in a confusing way), whereas some of the TAs I had in English classes were interesting and helpful.

Casuistry (Chris P), Friday, 29 April 2005 16:34 (nineteen years ago) link

OK, that's enough messing around.

Here's THE answer:

Prufrock is such a power lover that his lay ends up "like a patient etherized upon a table" (notice the similie: like). He likes taking his women to "one night cheap hotels", because of all the sawdust. His manhood is so unbelievable that he often hears the question "what is it?", but he prefers to get down to fucking, "let us make our visit".

Prufrock is also quite prolific, and he's not averse to group sex and pissing action: "In the room the women come and go". In fact, the women consider him an artist, they are "Talking of Michelangelo".

I'll let you discuss this angle with your TA. I'm sure you'll manage to convince him/ her. Come back if you want more.

SRH (Skrik), Sunday, 1 May 2005 08:01 (nineteen years ago) link

O would it be so! And you make a compelling case… at least to the girls in the back row, or at least to the ones you’re aiming for. But that’s the point anyway; screw the TA. The sad fact is, Profrock has no penis. Or at least not one that gets much exercise, except if you count when he’s alone, rubbing up against window-panes. Who wouldn’t be insecure, with those eyes that pin you wriggling to the wall, those braceleted arms that wrap around a shawl? And wondering later if he should’ve bitten off the matter with a smile… he should’ve! If he only could’ve!

Donald, Monday, 2 May 2005 00:59 (nineteen years ago) link

The mermaids don't have any vaginas either.

Hurting (Hurting), Monday, 2 May 2005 01:51 (nineteen years ago) link

OMG I just realized! They're all just WORDS!

Casuistry (Chris P), Monday, 2 May 2005 05:08 (nineteen years ago) link

Prufrock is also quite prolific, and he's not averse to group sex and pissing action: "In the room the women come and go".

HAHAHA I only just got this.

Hurting (Hurting), Monday, 2 May 2005 05:21 (nineteen years ago) link

I think we can reconcile our views, Donald, if we look at the poem from a diachronic angle. It is possible that Prufrock's manhood was once huge, as I suggested. However, at some point he began to fail to perform satisfactorily. Indeed, it "Curled once about the house, and fell asleep", which must have been infuriating.

It was then that either he or one of his women bit off his penis. I am now inclined to believe that he emasculated himself, but that he subsequently regrets his action: "Then how should I begin | To spit out all the butt-ends of my days and ways?" After healing, he is of course left "With a bald spot in the middle of my hair".

We totally get this pome!

SRH (Skrik), Monday, 2 May 2005 19:05 (nineteen years ago) link

Butt ends? He's a pooftah!

Casuistry (Chris P), Monday, 2 May 2005 21:57 (nineteen years ago) link

three months pass...
The poem is mostly figurative and actually deals not with the mundane issues suggested by your TA, but with a fairly obvious, though by no means clear, ontological content, which one might characterize variously as occult, metaphysical, or theological. Some of this figurative imagery reoccurs in other Eliot poems, and is more suggestive there. See for example the climbed stairs in Ash Wednesday, the eyes in The Hollow Men, and the ether reference in Four Quartets.

The poem begins with a quote from Dante, seemingly illustrative of Prufrock's address to the reader (which forms the text of Eliot's poem). In Dante, the statement is made by a damned soul, who answers a question only because he believes that his listener can never return to Earth to give away the answer, which he wishes to keep secret. This seemingly places Prufrock in the position of one who speaks out from the gulf of some abyss, addressing arcane matters not to be shared with those on Earth. In so doing, he implies something about the reader as well as about the speaker. Should it perhaps be recalled, however, that the damned soul in Dante, quoted at the beginning of Prufrock, was sent to hell for the sin of false, deceitful, and treacherous counselling?

The indecisive Prufrock seems to be trying to decide whether to continue climbing the stair, or to turn back. There might also be an element of Dante here, as well. The suggestion that he has "known them all before" (the evenings, afternoons, and mornings of his life) should perhaps be taken literally. He is not living on Earth, but is reliving, in some sense, elements of his life elsewhere, though "elsewhere" needn't be taken literally as indicative of physical place. Shall he continue this phantom existence, with its odd corruptions (e.g., the arm which seems at first fair and feminine but which reveals a hirsute defect when viewed under the lamp), or shall he address the "overwhelming question" and thereby "disturb the universe"? (The phrase "disturb the universe" should certainly be taken literally.) Yet throughout, he remains coy, skirting this question (much less its answer!). He does not return from the dead to advise the living (q.v. the story of Dives and Lazarus), but instead employs obscure metaphors suggestive (falsely?) of concealed meanings and mysteries. But perhaps he has decided that nobody would believe him, "though he rose from the dead".

Mark Adkins
msadkins04@yahoo.com

Mark Adkins, Tuesday, 9 August 2005 20:33 (eighteen years ago) link

P.S. It should also, perhaps, be noted that Prufrock compares himself to The Fool, a stock character in Elizabethan drama whose seemingly mad nonsense conceals wisdom.

Mark Adkins
msadkins04@yahoo.com

Mark Adkins, Tuesday, 9 August 2005 20:40 (eighteen years ago) link

I'm not sure I agree with your reading of an arm "downed with light brown hair" as a "defect." I think the narrator more likely considers it attractive.

Hurting (Hurting), Wednesday, 10 August 2005 00:01 (eighteen years ago) link

And I think the "damned soul" content is a metaphor for his state in his actual, mundane existence, not the other way around.

Hurting (Hurting), Wednesday, 10 August 2005 00:04 (eighteen years ago) link

Mark, you realize the poem works despite all that "ontological" claptrap, and not because of it, right?

Casuistry (Chris P), Wednesday, 10 August 2005 06:42 (eighteen years ago) link

Oh my gosh! Peaches!

youn, Wednesday, 10 August 2005 10:43 (eighteen years ago) link

Good luck on your thesis anyway Mark.

Hurting (Hurting), Wednesday, 10 August 2005 14:59 (eighteen years ago) link

Obviously the narrator does not consider the hair attractive...note the fact that the sentence is parenthetical, starts with "But" and ends with an exclamation point.

The ontology is what the poem is about, and thus is obviously what makes it.

Mark Adkins
msadkins04@yahoo.com

Mark Adkins, Wednesday, 10 August 2005 22:57 (eighteen years ago) link

Obviously the poem is not about mundane existence, as would be obvious to anyone who has read it. (I exclude non-sentients, because they are not anyone.) Do you really think the narrator has "wept and fasted, wept and prayed" over whether he's going to eat a peach (literally or figuratively)? How absurdly shallow you are. Go away, morons.


Mark Adkins
msadkins04@yahoo.com

Mark Adkins, Wednesday, 10 August 2005 23:00 (eighteen years ago) link

Now, the poem seems pretty obsessed with "mundane existance", and this seems to be where many of the narrator's anxieties lie: There are etherized patients, cheap hotels, restaurants littered with sawdust and oyster shells, yellow oozing fog, tongues licking, standing water, soot-filled chimneys, make up, toast and tea, stairs to walk down, bald spots, coats, neckties, and tie pins, thin arms and legs, endless cups of coffee and cigarettes, hairy arms, crabs, tea, cakes, and ices, not to mention marmalade and porcelain, doorways and novels and light shows and pillows and trousers and hairstyles and peaches! Some of these things are refined and some are decadant, and the inability for the refined things to stave off the decadant seems to be one of the main themes of the poem: Hence the refined white arms proving to have their vulgar little hairs; the reaction is not obviously revulsion nor is it necessarily lust, just more confirmation that all the refinement in the world will not keep you from all the vulgarities in the world, and certainly not from that ultimate vulgarity, death.

That is much more present in the poem than a few tossed off allusions to Dante.

Casuistry (Chris P), Wednesday, 10 August 2005 23:25 (eighteen years ago) link

DNFTT

as it clung to her thigh I started to cry (pr00de), Wednesday, 10 August 2005 23:29 (eighteen years ago) link

Do not feed the thesis, I know.

Casuistry (Chris P), Wednesday, 10 August 2005 23:37 (eighteen years ago) link

Obviously the narrator does not consider the hair attractive...note the fact that the sentence is parenthetical, starts with "But" and ends with an exclamation point.

I'm not sure this is so "obvious." Prufrock was written in 1917. According to various articles I'm finding on the net, body hair removal didn't become popular among women until the 1920s. So it's hard to understand why the narrator would be disgusted by a little arm hair (not to mention that it could have a subtle sexual undertone) -- also, the word "downed" sounds pleasant enough to me.

Hurting (Hurting), Thursday, 11 August 2005 03:46 (eighteen years ago) link

It's as though a very primitive computer spent the last two months analyzing the comments and trying to come up with a response.

Hurting (Hurting), Saturday, 15 October 2005 03:21 (eighteen years ago) link

I'm afraid I can't accept that interpretation, Chris.

Kal-El 9000 (Ken L), Saturday, 15 October 2005 07:27 (eighteen years ago) link

four months pass...
(x-post) Nabisco, do you have access to Gold Bud peaches? Where do you live? I will BRING YOU ONE. In summer.

Beth Parker (Beth Parker), Wednesday, 22 February 2006 15:54 (eighteen years ago) link

Can I have one too? I live just a few blocks from Nabisco.

Paul Eater (eater), Wednesday, 22 February 2006 22:15 (eighteen years ago) link

I will bring two. I will carefully transport them in eiderdown-lined boxes, to whatever township. And you will dare to eat them!

Beth Parker (Beth Parker), Wednesday, 22 February 2006 23:09 (eighteen years ago) link

Get busy plucking those geese, Beth!

Laurel (Laurel), Wednesday, 22 February 2006 23:25 (eighteen years ago) link

I'm on it.

Beth Parker (Beth Parker), Wednesday, 22 February 2006 23:42 (eighteen years ago) link

Great thread.

Rockist_Scientist (RSLaRue), Friday, 24 February 2006 02:47 (eighteen years ago) link

Especially the Eliot/Zeppelin mash-ups.

Rockist_Scientist (RSLaRue), Friday, 24 February 2006 02:47 (eighteen years ago) link

eider is duck,

anthony easton (anthony), Monday, 27 February 2006 11:59 (eighteen years ago) link

Oh, details.

Laurel (Laurel), Monday, 27 February 2006 15:48 (eighteen years ago) link

There are a lot of dead eiders on the beach here, killed by the big windy blizzard the other week. Also a razorbill! And a porpoise! The porpoise corpse actually preceded the blizzard. It's going through lots of changes, very slowly. Becoming more and more Swiss cheesified. My dog is strangely uninterested. I thought he'd roll in it. Where are the turkey vultures? I would have thought they'd strip it to bare bones by now.
Several years we had a lot of dead sea turtles washing up. You don't think of the waters of New England as harboring turtles and porpoises, but apparently they do.

Beth Parker (Beth Parker), Monday, 27 February 2006 19:37 (eighteen years ago) link

six months pass...
Well, perhaps they USED to, but now they're all dead.

James Morrison (JRSM), Thursday, 7 September 2006 06:02 (seventeen years ago) link

what a bizarre thread revival.

tom west (thomp), Thursday, 7 September 2006 10:00 (seventeen years ago) link

ten years pass...

I was lead here by the Random Homework Googler Memorial thread.

Beth's discussion of the dead things on the beach seems more interesting than the entire preceding discussion of Prufrock. She was one of the good ones.

a little too mature to be cute (Aimless), Sunday, 20 November 2016 00:44 (seven years ago) link


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