and not only a 'real' poem but a 'real' poem that I removed the last part of because I thought it was stupid but now I realize it's even stupider without it asdfjsaighsao
bernard snowy of the past what were you thinking
― otto von biz markie (bernard snowy), Wednesday, 20 May 2009 00:40 (fourteen years ago) link
all of which is to say: trayce, I feel u bro
― otto von biz markie (bernard snowy), Wednesday, 20 May 2009 00:41 (fourteen years ago) link
i'm kind of sad i didn't finish an ode to l0u1s jagg3r before the deadline. maybe in 2010 i'll be less lazy.
― fantazy land (harbl), Wednesday, 20 May 2009 00:46 (fourteen years ago) link
fwiw i tht your facebook ads poem was A+ and wd have srsly considered voting for it
as things stand, nobody is arguing with my current placement, which makes me sad. cmon, more debate!
harbl, i wd still like to see this ode
― cumlord smedley (country matters), Wednesday, 20 May 2009 00:47 (fourteen years ago) link
it's not done yet!
― fantazy land (harbl), Wednesday, 20 May 2009 00:47 (fourteen years ago) link
when it is done of course, i am patient man with much longing
― cumlord smedley (country matters), Wednesday, 20 May 2009 00:49 (fourteen years ago) link
"I went to the Donuts a-Dunkin" by EZ Snappin
I liked this one.
― cant go with u too many bees (Abbott), Wednesday, 20 May 2009 01:38 (fourteen years ago) link
"do you ever think about the waves" by G00blar
Awesome too...why did I vote so quickly?
I mean this poem is fucking funny as hell.
― cant go with u too many bees (Abbott), Wednesday, 20 May 2009 01:40 (fourteen years ago) link
I still have a cheque from a pome I was actually paid for in a local literary publication some years back! Never cashed it cos it was more symbolic than anything. Also, $40 is piss.
― Trayce, Wednesday, 20 May 2009 01:41 (fourteen years ago) link
$40 is AWESOME!!! Frame a high-quality scan of the check and with the original buy a fantastic bottle of wine.
― Beth Parker, Wednesday, 20 May 2009 01:51 (fourteen years ago) link
hello beth yes $40 would be very welcome in these quarters alsoplease try and convince me to vote for you rather than elmo
― cumlord smedley (country matters), Wednesday, 20 May 2009 01:55 (fourteen years ago) link
Hah! A modest amount to purchase true stardom!
― Beth Parker, Wednesday, 20 May 2009 01:58 (fourteen years ago) link
the two parts of my post were unrelated, honest
― cumlord smedley (country matters), Wednesday, 20 May 2009 02:02 (fourteen years ago) link
try this on for size:elmo's had a vibebeth's had a presence
― Aimless, Wednesday, 20 May 2009 02:06 (fourteen years ago) link
I haz opinions but am recusing myself in the name of administerial impartiality
― 鬼の手 (Edward III), Wednesday, 20 May 2009 02:08 (fourteen years ago) link
I don't think peeps should have to make campaign platforms for their work!
― cant go with u too many bees (Abbott), Wednesday, 20 May 2009 02:08 (fourteen years ago) link
I wish you could vote for more than one. This might result in a tie, but the two winners could then marry and breed UBERPOETS.
― Beth Parker, Wednesday, 20 May 2009 02:10 (fourteen years ago) link
Not all pairs are breeding pairs.
― Aimless, Wednesday, 20 May 2009 02:14 (fourteen years ago) link
IMO Ed III should furtively glance about, cast off his administerial robes and hurl forth his mind's collect
― cumlord smedley (country matters), Wednesday, 20 May 2009 02:18 (fourteen years ago) link
donuts a-shrunkin'.
― liberated erotic voyage of disco (Curt1s Stephens), Wednesday, 20 May 2009 02:31 (fourteen years ago) link
Is that a lost verse from the Twelve Days of Christmas?
― Beth Parker, Wednesday, 20 May 2009 02:45 (fourteen years ago) link
between EIII and Abbott's dog for me, with a dash of Dark Horse Elmo
― butt-rock miyagi (rogermexico.), Wednesday, 20 May 2009 02:47 (fourteen years ago) link
As an "outsider" I voted for Aimless, but there were many I liked here, and if I had more time I'd outline a few reasons, thoughts, head-scratches. Maybe tomorrow.
― Lostandfound, Wednesday, 20 May 2009 03:37 (fourteen years ago) link
thx, now I will know where my vote came from.
― Aimless, Thursday, 21 May 2009 18:55 (fourteen years ago) link
I voted for rent A+
― goodbye horses, I'm crying over you (Mulvaney), Thursday, 21 May 2009 19:08 (fourteen years ago) link
I like Beth's.
― EZ Snappin, Thursday, 21 May 2009 19:45 (fourteen years ago) link
Time Is Running Out1400 years of dark history of terrorism, torture, rape, and killing that can happen to youHow Would You Look?This is why we didn't hang out last night
What makes you Happy? Toys and your babies smile?Did you see this on Opra?Have You Lived Before?
How do you respond to experiences of rejection?Ask Questions. Get Answers.Know EverythingLive Near EverythingBecome a Fan of JesusLearn to stop hurting the ones you love.
Are you looking for someone?Have You Lived Before?Time Is Running Out
Are you having trouble putting your socks on ?This too shall pass!
― otto von biz markie (bernard snowy), Friday, 22 May 2009 13:18 (fourteen years ago) link
^^^this killed me dead. life is pretty good once you can get them socks on huh?
― I wanna be your toy boy (a hoy hoy), Friday, 22 May 2009 13:22 (fourteen years ago) link
That is actually even better, and you sir are a craftsman :D
First stanza was the highpoint imo
― Local Gouda (country matters), Friday, 22 May 2009 13:23 (fourteen years ago) link
Actually, the whole thing's great
thanks dudes! I'm glad y'all enjoy 'em, cuz they're a lot of fun to write.
the sock thing was from an ad for something called "The Sock Genie", which apparently looks like this:http://mysockgenie.com/images/sock_genie_demo_small.JPG???
― otto von biz markie (bernard snowy), Friday, 22 May 2009 13:32 (fourteen years ago) link
lol waht
really tempted to go thru all of these (except mine) with reviewing pen in hand, if only to spark some debate
― Local Gouda (country matters), Friday, 22 May 2009 13:37 (fourteen years ago) link
people with hip problems/replacements can need help putting on socks and shoes. just sayin.
― U2 raped goat (darraghmac), Friday, 22 May 2009 13:39 (fourteen years ago) link
yeah I get that, I just can't really figure out how it works
― otto von biz markie (bernard snowy), Friday, 22 May 2009 13:45 (fourteen years ago) link
For me it's a toss up between Retinal and TUESDYAS. But damn elmo, that really is good.
― delerium tremendous (wanko ergo sum), Friday, 22 May 2009 13:56 (fourteen years ago) link
poetries, good for what ales ye
― 鬼の手 (Edward III), Tuesday, 2 June 2009 14:52 (fourteen years ago) link
Live Near EverythingBecome a Fan of JesusLearn to stop hurting the ones you love.
I went to the Donuts a-DunkinAnd thought I would buy me a munchkin.When asked to describeWhat they were to my eyes,I said they were donuts a-shrunkin'.
― EZ Snappin
― cant go with u too many alfbrees (Abbott), Tuesday, 2 June 2009 22:52 (fourteen years ago) link
I think of this at least daily.
― cant go with u too many alfbrees (Abbott), Tuesday, 2 June 2009 22:53 (fourteen years ago) link
It is my only poem, composed while wasted at the establishment in question. I remember reciting it in my best Irish accent (which is quite horrible) and there was much rejoicing. Then they threw us out.
― EZ Snappin, Tuesday, 2 June 2009 23:49 (fourteen years ago) link
my new lady friend has me writing poems again
― BIG HOOS aka the steendriver, Wednesday, 3 June 2009 00:23 (fourteen years ago) link
aw that's sweet
remember folks, this poll closes, brokencyde album comes out, world ends
plz vote
― 鬼の手 (Edward III), Wednesday, 10 June 2009 19:10 (fourteen years ago) link
shit almost forgot to cast my vote
― roman knockwell (elmo argonaut), Wednesday, 10 June 2009 19:33 (fourteen years ago) link
there, done
― roman knockwell (elmo argonaut), Wednesday, 10 June 2009 19:35 (fourteen years ago) link
I am the string around yr finger
― 鬼の手 (Edward III), Wednesday, 10 June 2009 19:43 (fourteen years ago) link
^^^ unfortunate david carradine reference there
― Aimless, Thursday, 11 June 2009 00:20 (fourteen years ago) link
ed & i not that close, aimless
― roman knockwell (elmo argonaut), Thursday, 11 June 2009 00:32 (fourteen years ago) link
This poll is closing soon.
Sincerly yours,
Aimless the Unsystematic
― Aimless, Friday, 12 June 2009 17:36 (fourteen years ago) link
i think elmo has won it for me. but only because it is tacky to vote for oneself.
― the table is the table, Friday, 12 June 2009 20:50 (fourteen years ago) link
I'm glad that I hounded dude into participating, it paid off
― 鬼の手 (Edward III), Friday, 12 June 2009 21:45 (fourteen years ago) link