suggest reading the rest of that article, i only cp'd the part specifically about writing style but it's really good
― flopson, Thursday, 16 February 2012 03:32 (twelve years ago) link
Ugh, I once failed a student for writing a summary of a book chapter (about female blues singers of the 1920s) that was almost entirely fancy-sounding nonsense: "These committal-like tenures cut through the article as a salient explanation to their intercourse" was a typical sentence that stands out in my mind. He kept debating the mark, constantly arguing "Ah, but you can bend that definition" every time I showed him the meaning of a word in the dictionary and ultimately arguing that "any paper can be unclear".
xpost to Sokal Affair
― EveningStar (Sund4r), Thursday, 16 February 2012 03:32 (twelve years ago) link
(He was a psychology major.)
― EveningStar (Sund4r), Thursday, 16 February 2012 03:33 (twelve years ago) link
almost entirely fancy-sounding nonsense
that also failed to answer the questions asked btw
"those in the crossing must in the end know what is mistaken by all urging for intelligibility: that every thinking of being, all philosophy, can never be confirmed by 'facts,' i.e., by beings. Making itself intelligible is suicide for philosophy. Those who idolize 'facts' never notice that their idols only shine in a borrowed light. They are also meant not to notice this; for thereupon they would have to be at a loss and therefore useless. But idolizers and idols are used wherever gods are in flight and so announce their nearness."
― max, Thursday, 16 February 2012 03:33 (twelve years ago) link
XP to Sund4r Haha! My brother did school essays that sounded like that, because he'd just copied something and substituted every other word with a word randomly plucked from the thesaurus entry for that word.
― kinder, Thursday, 16 February 2012 03:35 (twelve years ago) link
btw here are jb's responses to the bad-writing award
http://www.lrb.co.uk/v21/n13/lettershttps://pantherfile.uwm.edu/wash/www/butler.htm
― flopson, Thursday, 16 February 2012 03:35 (twelve years ago) link
I think there can be pretty clear incentives for obfuscated language everywhere. outside of academia too. and I think the idea that the 'more complex = better' fallacy is something that invades other disciplines - like pick up a political science journal, it's all filled w/ pointless math for the sake of math, because math is good and scientific and and most importantly...*hard*. and I mean the field of economics...basically ruined forever by math.
something that's more complicated can give itself authority = there is an incentive towards complication, even when it's not actually there for a useful purpose.
― iatee, Thursday, 16 February 2012 03:36 (twelve years ago) link
Part of why I'm sometimes not sure what I'm doing anymore, or why I'm doing it:
TLCP tips...
• Identification and ownership of issues is necessary to promote open-ended dialogue and professional risk-taking.• Systematic evaluation of the consequences of actions is necessary if TLCPs are to refine and further develop interpretations and solutions.• Ownership by the school staff makes it more likely that TLCPs will be able to compete for priority.• Road blocks, misunderstandings, and disappointments need to be recognized as important “moments of learning” for both individuals and teams.• Common understanding of assessment, rubric criteria, curricular expectations and “big ideas” takes time; all present potential moments of uncertainty and learning.• Refining, adjusting and modifying occur in all stages and should be embraced as teachers co-construct their collective understanding through the experience.
"Co-construct" is very big these days. I realize this is mild when compared to more extreme academic language, but it can get depressing. You get bombarded with this stuff on an ongoing basis, and meanwhile you're sometimes just trying to get through to some kid that it's not okay to lose a pencil every other day.
― clemenza, Thursday, 16 February 2012 03:37 (twelve years ago) link
should academic writers think hard about why they are writing in a particular way? definitely. should they consider their audience? yes. and so should the reader!
i assume that Heidegger, max. That's a great passage!
― ryan, Thursday, 16 February 2012 03:38 (twelve years ago) link
yes it is! translation via wikipedia, lol
― max, Thursday, 16 February 2012 03:38 (twelve years ago) link
Surely, neither the LRB nor Eagleton believes that theorists should confine themselves to writing introductory primers such as those that he has chosen to provide.
http://gifsoup.com/webroot/animatedgifs/75383_o.gif
― Critique of Pure Moods (goole), Thursday, 16 February 2012 03:38 (twelve years ago) link
nazis: pro-obfuscation
― iatee, Thursday, 16 February 2012 03:39 (twelve years ago) link
you know honestly the trick for this stuff is to read it aloud (learned that trying milton in college)
― Critique of Pure Moods (goole), Thursday, 16 February 2012 03:40 (twelve years ago) link
by "this stuff" i mean ilx fyi
some of u guys may not get stoned enough
― max, Thursday, 16 February 2012 03:41 (twelve years ago) link
and I mean the field of economics...basically ruined forever by math.
do you really think so? i think there was definitely an initial incentive towards greater credibility that pushed mathematical economics forward, but math's usefulness in the field, especially empirically, is hard to argue against. i think the real loss in economics being so mathy is a focus away from political economics, towards more abstract models. admittedly i'm further from it but me humanities babble looks like the same thing, pushing relevant and accessible discussion aside in favour of an increasingly abstract, exclusively academic dialogue
― flopson, Thursday, 16 February 2012 03:44 (twelve years ago) link
I was going to ask how you would do economics without math.
― EveningStar (Sund4r), Thursday, 16 February 2012 03:45 (twelve years ago) link
i think the main problem unadressed by butler's response is like, wouldn't the better writer challenge common sense but still be readable?
― flopson, Thursday, 16 February 2012 03:47 (twelve years ago) link
haha flopson yeah that's what I meant I was just being dramatic , obv economics depends on a foundation of some math but the field has stagnated w/ a bunch of dudes throwing phd math at each other instead of like thinking about how the world actually works. for the same reason - you can't argue w/ complexity.
― iatee, Thursday, 16 February 2012 03:50 (twelve years ago) link
people are intimidated by it and nobody can criticize you if they don't understand you
― iatee, Thursday, 16 February 2012 03:51 (twelve years ago) link
flopson so otm in the last two posts, iatee otm, max otm. Cool thread
― sleepingbag, Thursday, 16 February 2012 03:53 (twelve years ago) link
feel like max was saying a different thing than iatee + flopson
― horseshoe, Thursday, 16 February 2012 03:54 (twelve years ago) link
hmmm the only post I was referring to was the most recent
― sleepingbag, Thursday, 16 February 2012 03:55 (twelve years ago) link
it's the most crucial to max's argument
― iatee, Thursday, 16 February 2012 03:56 (twelve years ago) link
i wasnt actually saying anything, heidegger was saying things
― max, Thursday, 16 February 2012 03:56 (twelve years ago) link
i think an interesting experiment prompted by this would be to read an academic article at random (or not could even be a famous one) and try to parse it googling all the terms you don't understand. i think that if dayo & ryan are right anyone should be able to come to at least some simple understanding of any article in the humanities
― flopson, Thursday, 16 February 2012 03:57 (twelve years ago) link
max authorial intent is dead
― i love pinfold cricket (gbx), Thursday, 16 February 2012 03:58 (twelve years ago) link
So that Butler quote does seem impenetrable to me, not that I spent great amounts of time on it. However, things like these are my bread and butter:
http://www.google.ca/url?sa=t&rct=j&q=fitsioris%20conklin&source=web&cd=3&ved=0CDYQFjAC&url=http%3A%2F%2Fcim08.web.auth.gr%2Fcim08_papers%2FFitsioris-Conklin%2FFitsioris-Conklin.pdf&ei=gH08T_itJOTx0gHbiLDBBw&usg=AFQjCNHpslICT6tVBvKzcO4hHjkD-6ovhA&cad=rja
http://www.mtosmt.org/issues/mto.09.15.5/mto.09.15.5.adams.html
http://www.mtosmt.org/issues/mto.07.13.1/mto.07.13.1.marion.html
http://www.ex-tempore.org/ExTempore00/MACHLEDE.html
I'm curious whether these seem purposely obfuscatory to someone who's not in the field.
― EveningStar (Sund4r), Thursday, 16 February 2012 03:58 (twelve years ago) link
try to parse it googling all the terms you don't understand.
googles "red wheel barrow"
― i love pinfold cricket (gbx), Thursday, 16 February 2012 03:59 (twelve years ago) link
― flopson, Wednesday, February 15, 2012 10:57 PM (2 minutes ago) Bookmark Flag Post Permalink
i dont see why this wouldnt work, i feel like this is how i read academic papers half the time. i mean not really anymore but "back when"
― max, Thursday, 16 February 2012 04:00 (twelve years ago) link
the problem with butler isn't that she uses words i don't know. she doesn't, really. and yet.
― the "intenterface" (difficult listening hour), Thursday, 16 February 2012 04:03 (twelve years ago) link
anyone anyone? cuz there are a lot of perfectly understandable things many anyones couldn't understand. also wouldn't this task failing suggest that anyone who claims to understand it is actually lying or fooling themselves, rather than merely that it's a bit unnecessarily opaque?
― Merdeyeux, Thursday, 16 February 2012 04:03 (twelve years ago) link
also orwell to thread obv
― the "intenterface" (difficult listening hour), Thursday, 16 February 2012 04:04 (twelve years ago) link
not sure i get that heiddeger quote. urging philosophers to be intelligible isn't the same thing as urging them to only state 'facts.' just because you're not limited to factual statements doesn't mean the nonfactual ones you do make have to be unintelligible
― flopson, Thursday, 16 February 2012 04:04 (twelve years ago) link
I never said anything except 'there are def incentives towards the unnecessarily opaque'
― iatee, Thursday, 16 February 2012 04:05 (twelve years ago) link
Heidegger's point is that it's when things are supposedly most "clear" that things are being obfuscated.
― ryan, Thursday, 16 February 2012 04:07 (twelve years ago) link
Carnap on Heidegger to thread
― Euler, Thursday, 16 February 2012 04:08 (twelve years ago) link
“[The move] from a [[structuralist] account in which [capital] is understood to [structure] [social relations] in relatively homologous ways] to a view of [[hegemony] in which [power relations] are [subject] to [repetition], [convergence], and [rearticulation]] brought the question of [temporality] into the [thinking of structure], and marked [a shift] from a form of [Althusserian theory] that takes [structural [totalities] as theoretical [objects]] to one in which [the insights into the [contingent possibility] of structure inaugurate a renewed conception of hegemony as bound up with the contingent [sites] and [strategies] of the rearticulation of power].”
i sorta tried to put in brackets all the concepts and references youd need. note that a lot of those are not words for which their is a common definition so much as words that activate certain questions, recall certain battles. this is on both a jargon level and a metaphorical level -- "subject to" repetition, structuralist "account" -- none of those words are chosen accidentally or would be the equivalent to other turns of phrase
― max, Thursday, 16 February 2012 04:10 (twelve years ago) link
other suggested experiment: pepsi challenge http://www.elsewhere.org/pomo/
― flopson, Thursday, 16 February 2012 04:11 (twelve years ago) link
althusserian theory
― flopson, Thursday, 16 February 2012 04:17 (twelve years ago) link
Martha Nussbaum on Judith Butler
This criticism of Butler is exceptionally clear and understandable. Because I have not read a single bit of Judith Butler's writing, I cannot say if this criticism is just or accurate. However, its clarity and specifity would allow me, were I to read Butler, to discover whether or not it describes what I am reading. Score one for non-obfuscated academic writing, as practised by Martha Nussbaum. She could be wrong, but she doesn't hide her meaning.
― Cosy Moments (Aimless), Thursday, 16 February 2012 04:19 (twelve years ago) link
i used to be so into althusser
― BIG HOOS aka the steendriver, Thursday, 16 February 2012 04:19 (twelve years ago) link
its not purposefully obfuscated, its just a culture that doesnt care abt good writing, it cares abt other things, which is why only people who care abt those things care to read it
― lag∞n, Thursday, 16 February 2012 05:19 (twelve years ago) link
good point
― flopson, Thursday, 16 February 2012 06:03 (twelve years ago) link
yeah jho seems p otm, there. i can't speak sensibly about academic writing in the humanities because i have a lot of feelings, but i would not be inclined to describe it as purposely obscure. i think it is just bad writing. butler, for example, in her academic work, writes badly but is also writing about real things.
― horseshoe, Thursday, 16 February 2012 06:09 (twelve years ago) link
i have an irritation with her because she was very annoying at a talk about the state of the discipline i attended while in graduate school. she seemed incredibly out of touch with reality in the sense of the economic pressures on universities and their effects on english departments. which i guess she can be, because she's judith butler. she should probably not talk on panels about those things.
― horseshoe, Thursday, 16 February 2012 06:11 (twelve years ago) link
― lag∞n, Thursday, 16 February 2012 00:19 (52 minutes ago) Bookmark Flag Post Permalink
i know i just otm'd this but like otoh come on smart people esp influential big name ones really should write well. if they're smart enough to come up with these supposedly interesting worthwhile ideas they could probably spend another ten minutes making in intelligible. also like, is that really what's happening, that they're having niche discussions about things only they care about? i suspect they're writing about things a lot of people would or do care about, and they shouldn't make their discussion so exclusive
― flopson, Thursday, 16 February 2012 06:19 (twelve years ago) link
i think their arguments are reliant on a lot of philosophical/metaphysical underpinnings that are difficult to write about clearly. certainly some people would say that if academic writing in the humanities were less reliant on certain thinkers, it would be clearer and more valuable.
also tbf there is a lot of academic writing in the humanities that is not butleresque. even in literary criticism. not reliant/based in poststructuralism.
― horseshoe, Thursday, 16 February 2012 06:23 (twelve years ago) link
also i feel like people write badly because it's hard to write well
― horseshoe, Thursday, 16 February 2012 06:29 (twelve years ago) link