Editors of the music press/fanzines - what is wrong with them?

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Alright, so whenever I try to be a music journalist in any way, shape or form, whether it's for the littlest fanzine or an actual paying gig, I end up in massive fuckoff rows with editors.

The issue, always: THE DREADED WORD COUNT

Now look, I understand in the print medium, that there is a space issue, and I TRY to keep my prose concise in those cases. But when writing for the web, space/size issues are REALLY not so much of a concern.

I'm in yet another row with yet another editor of an online journal because I wrote a 1200 word review of an all-day event which showcased five bands. (it's about dronerock - something very close to my heart.) This was deemed "too long".

I've checked out other music sites (OK, exactly Freaky Trigger and Pitchfork) and 1200 words for an article would actually be SHORT for either of those sites. PF seems to average about 1600 words, and FT runs anywhere up to 2500.

I KNOW that my style is long-winded, and I do compensate for it. Generally, before an article even gets anywhere near the editor, it has been through at *least* two revisions, one for style and one for length.

I've dug in my feet on this article and refused to cut. Am I being a prima donna writer, in refusing to have my prose chopped, or should I stick to my principles?

(Meta-question: how long is an acceptible length for a web-based music review/feature? Personally, I fucking *HATE* NME-style soundbite journalism, especially on the web, where you can do investigate things so much more thoroughly.)

kate, Tuesday, 22 October 2002 13:25 (twenty-three years ago)

what site is it for? couldn't you run it on FT instead? i agree about not wanting to cut, its nice to have something a bit longer to print off and read

gareth (gareth), Tuesday, 22 October 2002 13:27 (twenty-three years ago)

That's an idea. Tom, would you be interested in having a fairly "lightweight" (for me) but "too long" (for soundbite wannabe NME kiddies) dissection of Dronerock under the guise of a Quickspace review on FT?

kate, Tuesday, 22 October 2002 13:31 (twenty-three years ago)

The man ran an article on CARTER USM, for heavens sake. I don't see how he would say no.

Nicole (Nicole), Tuesday, 22 October 2002 13:36 (twenty-three years ago)

The problems with some editors of on-line zines is that firstly its their own personal labour of love and hence can be too proprietal. At the same time its about how much "hands on" editing they want to do. Is it their job as editor to reform your basic material into some sort of house style (and house style might include nothing too long).

Tom is a much more hands off editor - time issues and also because he doesn't own what you write. And the difference has become house style at FT (after all - Giant Spiders don't quite fit into the usual musical bent. As for The Jubilee Stuff...)

Pete (Pete), Tuesday, 22 October 2002 13:45 (twenty-three years ago)

long articles on the interweb SuXoR.

DV (dirtyvicar), Tuesday, 22 October 2002 13:46 (twenty-three years ago)

Is it their job as editor to reform your basic material into some sort of house style (and house style might include nothing too long).

When the "house style" is that they don't HAVE a house style, and I quote:

2.2'The writing's quite varied/amateurish in places, isn't it?'

Quite possibly. We make no apologies for this. We have a diverse team with a diverse set of writing styles. We'd like to make things as good as we can, but ultimately it's a site by music fans for music fans, and our primary motivation is to put the word out about the music we love, provide a forum for discussion and a useful resource for music fans.


I don't see how that applies.

I think, quite snottily, that in this case, that the site/zine seems to feature a preponderance of hardcore/emo/punk. Not exactly genres known for their attention spans. Considering that the average length of your average dronerock song is about seven minutes or so, perhaps fans of the genre have a slightly higher attention span?

long articles on the interweb SuXoR.

I could not disagree more. I don't care what the length of an article is, I care about the quality of the writing. In fact, if an article is long, I'm more likely to bookmark it and go back and read it several times. And, as Gareth points out, some people like to print out good web articles and read them at leisure.

kate, Tuesday, 22 October 2002 13:54 (twenty-three years ago)

Come ON!!!

You people probably read more articles on the web than any other single groups of people gathered in one space.

What ARE your thoughts on the length issue? I'm genuinely interested to know. Don't just fucking ignore this cause it's blah blah, another Kate complaining thread, like always...

kate, Tuesday, 22 October 2002 14:26 (twenty-three years ago)

If it's good it doesn't matter how long it is, but I guess if someone gave me a word limit beforehand I'd try and stick to it. Did he tell you how long it had to be before? I guess on the internet it doesn't matter a shit really, are you getting paid? If I was writing for nothing there's no way I'd bother cutting down the article.

Ronan (Ronan), Tuesday, 22 October 2002 14:37 (twenty-three years ago)

If it's good it doesn't matter how long it is, but I guess if someone gave me a word limit beforehand I'd try and stick to it.

Pretty much my thought. I've often found that if I'm given a word limit, oddly enough, I sometimes have to work to reach it, whereas if I'm given no limit I'll just ramble on. I think this might be because the limit forces you to think of the 'important' stuff you're trying to convey whereas without it you can ramble a bit more freely.

Ned Raggett (Ned), Tuesday, 22 October 2002 14:48 (twenty-three years ago)

my thoughts are that long articles on the web SuXoR. I seldom read long articles on the web, regardless of how good the writing is, I read chat related stuff like this.

DV (dirtyvicar), Tuesday, 22 October 2002 14:55 (twenty-three years ago)

We heard you the first time.

Emmanuel Goldstein, Tuesday, 22 October 2002 14:59 (twenty-three years ago)

simple answer = don't fall in love w/ yr own shit

dave q, Tuesday, 22 October 2002 15:03 (twenty-three years ago)

lists definitely SuXoR. fed up with looking at webzines/blogs and all you get are my top 100 whatever. it's the equivalent of a chef placing a bunch of separate ingredients on a breadboard in front of you and saying here's your dinner.

Emmanuel Goldstein, Tuesday, 22 October 2002 15:04 (twenty-three years ago)

sorry that was uncalled for. 'just trying to help' y'know. personally tho, the longer the better. Really, if i were an editor send me a 3-vol. book, I'd publish it without even reading it

dave q, Tuesday, 22 October 2002 15:05 (twenty-three years ago)

I like long articles, whether in print or online -- this whole short-attention-span slavishness (which has seeped its way into the print world too, as you've probably noticed) is a testament to the clueless superficiality running rampant today. It results in an overriding tone of blog-esque glibness with little room for any writerly idiosyncracies, which are a large part of what make the most compelling articles that way in the first place.

maura (maura), Tuesday, 22 October 2002 15:06 (twenty-three years ago)

length doesn't matter, it's width that counts

*dodges flying cabbages, zucchinis etc*

J0hn Darn13ll3, Tuesday, 22 October 2002 15:06 (twenty-three years ago)

what about breaking it up into smaller, more pert segements and maintaining a good groove?

jess (dubplatestyle), Tuesday, 22 October 2002 15:09 (twenty-three years ago)

jess this is not i love gardening!

Emmanuel Goldstein, Tuesday, 22 October 2002 15:16 (twenty-three years ago)

Thanks for the suggestions, folks! Knew a bit of foot-stamping would get some response.

1) No, no word count was ever indicated prior to article. Which is one of the reasons that I actually like writing for this organ. Knowing a word-count in advance kills my creativity, as Ned noted.

2) No, no money involved. I'm doing it for the LOVE, maaaan. Hence my attachment to my work.

3) Have suggested breaking it up into two reviews, but that would really destroy the thing, for reasons which wouldn't make sense unless you read it.

kate, Tuesday, 22 October 2002 15:34 (twenty-three years ago)

Well then it looks like you can tell them where to go really, doing things for the love is something which irritates me cos I'm a student and I really need the money and feel I deserve it but it is cool being your own boss, pretty much.

Ronan (Ronan), Tuesday, 22 October 2002 15:37 (twenty-three years ago)

If you're doing it for love then you're totally in the right. If you had been getting paid then tough shit, it happens every day. (Just found out that magazine has lopped off 250 words of my Ladytron piece, even though I was bang on the word count, because the pictures were good. The last thing I wrote for one music paper was killed due to someone upstairs selling another page of adverts. It's annoying, but there you go.)

Anna (Anna), Tuesday, 22 October 2002 15:45 (twenty-three years ago)

The funny thing about journalism, is, getting paid, I've actually once had the experience of writing something, they came back to me and said "this is great... can you give us twice as much?" and doubled my paycheck.

Of course, this was when I had a full time job, and didn't need the money. Typical ...

kate, Tuesday, 22 October 2002 16:22 (twenty-three years ago)

i think you really have to format long-form interweb pieces to be broken down. even though i didn't do that to the 90s hardcore thing tom published in three segments it worked despite itself because of how i had formatted it.

jess (dubplatestyle), Tuesday, 22 October 2002 16:24 (twenty-three years ago)

so why is an editor allowed to cut 250 words out of a signed article?
i've had articles not being printed because they sold more space for ads (not being printed, but paid, since i had done my work anyway), but anytime there's anything to be cut down they must tell me so i can do it shorter (or longer).
i mean, you sign the whole piece. if they can change it, then it doesn't belong to you anymore, i wouldn't sign something i haven't controlled 100%.
i'm with ned, though. the best thing is to know the length beforehand, and stick to it.
as for long articles on the net, i'm for that if the writing's good and the subject's interesting enough.

joan vich (joan vich), Tuesday, 22 October 2002 20:06 (twenty-three years ago)

Kate, is your 1600 estimate on Pitchfork length based on the "We Are The World" articles? Cause reviews are half that length -- I'm pretty sure it's only the odd "ambitious" W.A.T.W. that gets over 1000.

I have massive problems with getting in under length limits, as some of you might guess -- the process of chopping pieces down under them hurts me in my heart and I think makes a lot of the stuff I do unentertainingly dense. I completely understand them, though, even online -- especially online -- for two reasons: (a) it's that much harder for an online publication to project the sense of a "house style" that print magazines can, and some vague uniformity of length is a big help with that, and more importantly (b) people have choices online. If I have a print magazine in my hand I will stick with an article -- even if I don't, it's likely that I'll flip through the rest and come straight back to it. There's a limited number of reading options that don't involve my getting up and going somewhere else and finding different reading material. Online, you can jet as soon as your interest wanes: if you're starting to skim and the progress bar is still up in its upper third and you seem to recall seeing "part one of four" up at the top, it's really easy to wonder what's over on X other site and run off. In other words, the fact that the web can affordably accommodate long pieces doesn't necessarily make them any more entertaining to read than they might be in print.

There's a right length for any treatment of a topic. I think the shortening attention span Maura mentions comes from this: it's really better to err on the side of going shorter than that "right length." Because people like to finish the articles they started.

nabisco (nabisco), Tuesday, 22 October 2002 20:42 (twenty-three years ago)

Personally I think most articles below 1000 words are not worth my time, because they usually only have superficial information to impart. In print or online.

Nicole (Nicole), Tuesday, 22 October 2002 21:14 (twenty-three years ago)

"The problems with some editors of on-line zines is that firstly its their own personal labour of love and hence can be too proprietal"

But this is the joy of internet zines, if you want your zine to have a specific style, then don't let anyone else write for you, and do it all yourself. Once you've allowed other people's input then your zine's style will change, no matter how much editorial powers you use.

jellybean (jellybean), Tuesday, 22 October 2002 21:23 (twenty-three years ago)

Well, 1000 is possibly a bad place to be making the mental long/short division!

I have to admit that lately I like three-sentence capsule collections -- say, a page full of 75-word blurbs on 20 different singles. The formal restraint does something interesting to the writing -- and it's still 1500 words, only organized such that you can scavenge it more for what you really want. I wouldn't deny that this format just as often leads to a lot of useless one-liners and no actual substance -- but even then, there are the occasional examples where the one-liners really are substantial.

I can't believe I'm sticking up for short here -- this is some sort of residual guilt over having written 4000 words on the Strokes.

nabisco (nabisco), Tuesday, 22 October 2002 21:48 (twenty-three years ago)

The formal restraint does something interesting to the writing

Or can, at least, yes. Hell, I'm doing that on a regular basis! ;-)

Ned Raggett (Ned), Tuesday, 22 October 2002 21:51 (twenty-three years ago)

I think doing stuff Drowned in Sound in the first place is proof that you don't take your writing seriously enough, but hey.

Emma Goldman, Tuesday, 22 October 2002 22:00 (twenty-three years ago)

My opinion on long/short -

I never edit for length on FT. I do cut people's articles if I think they're repeating themselves or qualifying themselves too much but thats not the same thing really. When I format a page for FT I try and make sure it doesn't go over 1500 words - I don't break the articles up too much because some people print them out but if a longer article can be broken up without loss of clarity I'll do it (cf Jess' and my latest things and the Jubilee stuff). Some people won't read long articles online - I don't often. My advice is, if you're interested, print it and you'll read it eventually.

I think in this situation "too long" might be a vague get-out for "I don't like it" - have you asked the editor to send you a suggested revision? By all means submit it to FT though Kate! We seem to be getting a lot of articles about rock (indie or drone or alt- or whatever) and I'm trying to balance them with other stuff so it might not be published v.quickly though.

Tom (Groke), Tuesday, 22 October 2002 22:07 (twenty-three years ago)

Ha! I've read stuff of yours before, Kate, without even realising that was your pen name, though now I read it I wonder why I didn't suspect sooner ("wibbling"!). Is the version there now the full thing or did it get hacked down? It was rather long for a gig review, but on the other hand I often find the site's articles a bit shorter than I'd like, so I was quite happy to see a longer article.

Personally I read it all because I liked the bands it was about; perhaps their logs say different, but I very much suspect none of their visitors reads every single article - I only wander along there once in a while and there are always loads of new articles whenever I do so, so I just read ones about bands I like or bands with stupid names - and so most people reading it will also be interested in the bands in question. If they're that bothered about 2k of extra storage or the distress caused by hitting "back" and then possibly but probably not deciding never to come back, they could hoover some of the more content-free rants [pot, kettle, I know] out of the non-music sections.

(If anyone who works for the site in question comes along here then I do like your site, that's why I read it, and that's why I recognised the quotation above and went to take a look. Oh, and sp: Laetitia - ok, you may hit me now, but there's one for the "great names nobody's called any more" thread. Finally, you may disregard everything I say because I really can't write reviews and whenever I try they end up as about 27 A4 pages of irrelevant tedium. As do my ILX posts, dammit. Sorry.)

Rebecca (reb), Tuesday, 22 October 2002 22:12 (twenty-three years ago)

at least you dont have an editor that requires qoutes for everything but movies and pitches it to the lcd. (in his word forrestry students and frat boys)

anthony easton (anthony), Tuesday, 22 October 2002 22:31 (twenty-three years ago)

At least your editor pretends to read your work.

B:Rad (Brad), Tuesday, 22 October 2002 22:55 (twenty-three years ago)

is there really that much to say about quickspace? or do you talk mostly about th faith healers? then i could understand.

keith (keithmcl), Wednesday, 23 October 2002 01:24 (twenty-three years ago)

I used to restrict to length, or edit with permission for length, at times - I'd decide that subject X was only worth a page, and it took a lot of persuading to make me stretch; but on the other hand, the right article on any subject might persuade me, and unsolicited stuff made its own limits. I guess on a website you have less restriction, but you probably have the kind of balance issues Tom cites, and you're surely entitled to make your own decisions about whether you want to publish something.

No criticism intended towards Kate, but sometimes 'make it shorter' means 'there isn't enough content for the length, and it will be improved by trimming'.

Martin Skidmore (Martin Skidmore), Wednesday, 23 October 2002 17:33 (twenty-three years ago)

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Mr Noodles (Mr Noodles), Wednesday, 23 October 2002 17:43 (twenty-three years ago)

I haven't read Kate's writing, so I'm not impugning her skills, but generally long pieces feel padded to me. I'm sure the writer thinks it's all A-material, but it's a rare few (and I don't think I'm one of them) who produce interesting digressions and/or detailed explorations of subjects.

It's an editor's job to edit. (The word's even in his title!) As a writer you're probably not supposed to like it. At the same time, I feel like most music writing on the Web I read would benefit from a little more concision/focus on main points. It's not an attention-span thing so much as quality control.

wl (wl), Wednesday, 23 October 2002 18:14 (twenty-three years ago)

one thing writing in tightly circumscribed spaces teaches you is that you'd better know what you mean to say, because you're not going to have much if any space to say it. before I began writing short pieces, I'd wind on and on and on, and while I can't disown that writing, it's sort of painful to look back on: GOD did I repeat myself a lot. who doesn't when they're writing 3000 words? now, even though I doubt I succeed at it all the time, I try hard to have each sentence mean something distinct, to introduce new ideas all the time, to not just be fucking around on the page. good editors see through that all the time, because they deal with it all the time. obviously I still feel wronged in certain instances where editors have cut assertions/sentences/jokes, but overall those actions have taught me a hell of a lot more about writing than letting me blather on forever would have.

M Matos (M Matos), Wednesday, 23 October 2002 22:41 (twenty-three years ago)

i just wrote two "pitches" that were 1475 words combined. obviously, i'm the epitome of pith.

jess (dubplatestyle), Wednesday, 23 October 2002 22:44 (twenty-three years ago)

ten years pass...

They really don't like long sentences, some of these people. Good thing Henry James is dead.

Miss Arlington twirls for the Coal Heavers (Dr Morbius), Tuesday, 3 September 2013 18:29 (twelve years ago)


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