Quoting lyrics as an indication of mediocrity: misleading?

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I only ask that because many reviews I've read will quote a banal line from a song, and then the reviewer will groan "see how lame they are?" Or vice versa, quote a well written line as an example of superior talent and such.

I've always felt this was a bit misleading, since it's all about the performance and the delivery of said lyric. Read Marvin Gaye on paper and it's nothing special. Kinda like those early Beatles lyrics, which read like schoolyard chants, but are delivered with conviction.

Anyway, just a thought there.

ham on rye (ham on rye), Thursday, 19 June 2003 19:45 (twenty-two years ago)

I'll quote a lyric if I think it's great little piece of wordplay or if it says something about some sort of theme or something.
it's not ALL about the perf and deliv.

Horace Mann (Horace Mann), Thursday, 19 June 2003 19:47 (twenty-two years ago)

i'm seldom interested in lyrics so if they're quoted to illustrate how good/bad a song is then i'm unlikely to pay much attention to that.

stevem (blueski), Thursday, 19 June 2003 20:00 (twenty-two years ago)

Well it doesn't matter if the lyric is on a Shakespearean level, if it isn't performed in an interesting way. Banal lyrics can be redeemed by fantastic music, but rarely the other way around (IMHO)

ham on rye (ham on rye), Thursday, 19 June 2003 20:00 (twenty-two years ago)

lyrics are part of the package.
like you might say "and when the bass drum goes boom-whacka-boom" just like you might say "and when he sings 'turn me on, dead man'" or whatever.

Horace Mann (Horace Mann), Thursday, 19 June 2003 20:06 (twenty-two years ago)

If it's a great lyric that happens to have been delivered well then quoting it will serve to illustrate part of the overall greatness ennit (or if it's one great lyric among like, loads of other great ones)

Ferg (Ferg), Thursday, 19 June 2003 20:10 (twenty-two years ago)

quoting lyrics one way or the other is a lame way to fill column inches

Millar (Millar), Thursday, 19 June 2003 20:14 (twenty-two years ago)

i agree, it's really annoying. a great song can easily be made to look stupid on paper, and vice versa.

Al (sitcom), Thursday, 19 June 2003 20:16 (twenty-two years ago)

I dunno, it can be a fun way to poke a bit at the band. Generally I just make some short comments about lyrics, if any, but now and then I can't help myself, hence why in one review I felt the urge to give a separate paragraph to: "Blame it on God. Blame it on God. Blame it on God. LIAR!"

It's just so precious!
That being said, I don't really see any problem with people going a bit into the lyrics in their reviews, if anything, with rock music and such there's often so little of notable content on an album that the lyrics are all that makes it stand out a bit; that shows us why we're not listening to Terry Riley or whatever instead.

Shit, I don't even agree with myself now!
This board is REALLY bad for me, I'm becoming all devil's adjunctive

Øystein Holm-Olsen (Øystein H-O), Thursday, 19 June 2003 20:24 (twenty-two years ago)

Or vice versa, quote a well written line as an example of superior talent and such.

ham on rye's neglecting to hyphenate "well-written" only highlights his inability to construct even a simple sentence, much less a convincing argument. C-

Curt1s St3ph3ns, Thursday, 19 June 2003 20:31 (twenty-two years ago)

i suppose a film can be ruined by a poor script, but conversely my enjoyment of films like X-Men 2 or Matrix Reloaded is not really affected by that despite suffering that very same problem at times. it doesn't HAVE to be important basically, not if there are other things to look at and appreciate i.e. the visuals or the music.

stevem (blueski), Thursday, 19 June 2003 20:38 (twenty-two years ago)

I thought this thread was going to be about whether going around quoting lyrics was an indication of mediocrity. I would probably have said yes.

N. (nickdastoor), Thursday, 19 June 2003 20:51 (twenty-two years ago)

ham on rye's neglecting to hyphenate "well-written" only highlights his inability to construct even a simple sentence, much less a convincing argument. C-
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At least I wasn't your "dud of the week".

Why the personal attack? Seems a little bit unnecessary, Curt.

ham on rye (ham on rye), Thursday, 19 June 2003 21:03 (twenty-two years ago)

i agree, it's really annoying. a great song can easily be made to look stupid on paper, and vice versa.
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My point exactly. If someone panned an Al Green tune, and used his lyrics as proof, I might think "Shit, sounds like tripe to me..."
But that's a misleading argument, in that particular case. It doesn't matter what he's saying as much as how he's saying it.

ham on rye (ham on rye), Thursday, 19 June 2003 21:09 (twenty-two years ago)

Although my argument falls flat when faced with Lenny Kravtiz's "Fly Away"....

ham on rye (ham on rye), Thursday, 19 June 2003 21:44 (twenty-two years ago)

Err, Curtis : From the Guardian style guide:

Never use hyphens after adverbs, eg genetically modified, politically naive. But do use them to form compound adjectives, eg two-tonne vessel, three-year deal

N. (nickdastoor), Thursday, 19 June 2003 22:23 (twenty-two years ago)

I was kidding. I was treating your post in the same way the lyrics are used to criticize an album. It was supposed to be, you know, ironic.. But I have failed =( Sorry for the confusion.

Curt1s St3ph3ns, Thursday, 19 June 2003 22:38 (twenty-two years ago)

Ohhhh I understand, heh heh. I was thinking I'd have to work on my grammar... =)

Cheers, friend.

ham on rye (ham on rye), Thursday, 19 June 2003 22:43 (twenty-two years ago)

I sort of agonized over bad lyric-quoting earlier this week, and it went like this:

(a) Sometimes I like Audio Bullys lyrics; sometimes they're bad but it doesn't matter; sometimes they're bad so I tune them out
(b) At worst, however, they are really really bad
(c) When they're really-bad they're really-bad in a particular way that I think reflects certain qualities of the record as a whole
(d) Therefore:
(e) "About a year I was with her for / and when we broke it left me quite sore." All of the things that are wrong with this are, in my opinion, the same things that go wrong with the guy's lyrics lots of other spots.
(f) I feel weirdly guilty about it, since that is a semi-isolated clanger and certainly not representative of the overall quality of the lyrics, but
(g) I also feel some weird duty to the reader, cause I know plenty of people could read that line and know for certain, right then, that this is not an album they will like, and we might as well save them the time.

nabisco (nabisco), Thursday, 19 June 2003 22:45 (twenty-two years ago)

since the times of peak Bob Dylan and Bob Dylan influence lyrics have generally become less and less important

there are some "artists" and some people for whom lyrics are just another instrument anyway (ie doesn't matter what's being sung) (obvious example: Can)

yet for some sorts of song the whole thing will hang together or fall on the strength of the lyrics as they seem to provide a cohesion between the sound of the music and the ideas in the lyrics (obvious example: Velvet Underground)

i think that it's different for each "artist", so i think quoting lyrics in some "artists'" cases are going to be crucial if it turns out to be a negative review (obvious example: The Fall)

george gosset (gegoss), Thursday, 19 June 2003 23:01 (twenty-two years ago)

i think that it's different for each "artist", so i think quoting lyrics in some "artists'" cases are going to be crucial if it turns out to be a negative review (obvious example: The Fall)

Or Bjork, for that matter. Read on a lyric sheet: some of her verses don't appear to make much sense:

You'll be given love
You'll be taken care of
You'll be given love
You have to trust it

(from All Is Full Of Love)

Taken out of song context, a reviewer can say, "Why the hell is she so popular? These lyrics are so mediocre", not thinking that she is building a mood. Also, that the fact that fans can relate to that is what keeps them coming back for more.

Nichole Graham (Nichole Graham), Thursday, 19 June 2003 23:15 (twenty-two years ago)

What bugs me is when "lame" or "mediocre" lyrics are quoted disparagingly from someone whose main strengths have never been particularly about lyrics. I'm thinking of the last Madonna record: it was like every reviewer was shipped American Life inside a Leonard Cohen jewel case or something. I still haven't heard the album, but the numerous reviews that quoted lyrics have predisposed me to not hate it so much. (Also, Phil Spector got into this argument once on live TV with David Susskind, whose name I don't know how to spell.)

scott woods (s woods), Friday, 20 June 2003 00:41 (twenty-two years ago)

I think quoting lyrics can sometimes help to give at least some sense of an artist's voice (Eminem springs to mind). But I try to do it sparingly, because so few lyrics actually read well out of context. And yeah, quoting lyrics to make someone sound stupid is weak; it's the old Steve Allen "Be-Bop-a-Lula" trick.

JesseFox (JesseFox), Friday, 20 June 2003 01:02 (twenty-two years ago)

it's actually farely rare that lyrics look good on paper. unless you're john darnielle. of course if you were willing to quote an entire album as justification for why an album sucks, there's always coldplay's new one.

Felcher (Felcher), Friday, 20 June 2003 03:15 (twenty-two years ago)

This is all a subset of "Bad reviews: misleading?", because just about all rockcrit pans criticise the record at its worst, which although entertaining in and of itself, doesn't give a convincing reason to stay away. Typically the bad parts, lyrics or otherwise, are taken out of context - the equivalent of picking plot holes - giving the author an opportunity to say, "Ha ha, this sucks", but the record as a whole is only panned in a superficial way ("it's too xxx" or the dreaded "it's not original enough"). Hardly anyone examines the structure of the enterprise as a whole - not the way Pauline Kael and many other movies crits have done. Admittedly this is probably harder with music.

b.R.A.d. (Brad), Friday, 20 June 2003 03:36 (twenty-two years ago)

Case study - Xgau's Bunny Stomp:

The "Must to Avoids" at the bottom aren't very deep - the Lauryn Hill quotes from her - in context - to make a (funny) personal attack; the WOW review basically says "They're not bad because they're Christians, they're bad because they're those Christians". Both only give token attention to the music and don't answer what I think is a crucial question, why anyone would listen to it in the first place.

The Ludacris dis goes much deeper - it's an easy one to attack holistically because you can turn on the moral indignation. The Tenacious D is even better because he admits Jack Black's gifts , and then shows how meaningless they are in this context.

b.R.A.d. (Brad), Friday, 20 June 2003 03:49 (twenty-two years ago)

I quote from lyrics when I think quoting the lyrics sheds light on the record. So when I was writing about "Osama Say" the other day I felt I needed to - the infectious lunacy of the record needed illustration.

Also quoting bad lyrics is often funny.

Tico Tico (Tico Tico), Friday, 20 June 2003 05:35 (twenty-two years ago)

Reminds me of that Village Voice fellow's criticism of the Underworld album "Second Toughest In the Infants", which he criticized for having nonsensical lyrics. Of course, with that particular group, lyrics are used abstractly, so he missed the point. The lyrics to "Pearl's Girl" on paper might look confounding, but in the music they make perfect sense, if you get what I mean.

ham on rye (ham on rye), Friday, 20 June 2003 05:41 (twenty-two years ago)

But Underworld's lyrics are awful - as a listener they're *the* main thing that really puts me off the band - so thumbs up to him for pointing that out. He might have 'misunderstood' the band's intent but he 'understood' all to well what listening to them might be like.

Tico Tico (Tico Tico), Friday, 20 June 2003 05:52 (twenty-two years ago)

It might be awful if the point was to make some sort of sense, but they're used like another instrument. They're strange, weird, stream-of-consciousness stuff. It's like some weird fucked-up language they've got going on there, and the meaning behind the words is not the point. Sorry you feel differently, their music I find quite remarkable (esp the album in question)

ham on rye (ham on rye), Friday, 20 June 2003 08:04 (twenty-two years ago)

used like another instrument

am i the only person who feels that it is a complete cop-out (and also staggeringly daft) when bands say this?

electric sound of jim (electricsound), Friday, 20 June 2003 08:09 (twenty-two years ago)

used like another instrument

am i the only person who feels that it is a complete cop-out (and also staggeringly daft) when bands say this?

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Probably not. I think they're one of the few bands for whom that works. Their lyrics are clearly not intended to mean anything, and are used in a strictly abstract manner. Works for me. C'est la vie.

ham on rye (ham on rye), Friday, 20 June 2003 08:16 (twenty-two years ago)

The problem is that this "strange, weird, stream-of-consciousness stuff" comes off like the worst kind of amateur poetry. Of course it's possible to do the nonsense thing well - Brian Eno's Another Green World and Before And After Science are wonderful Lewis-Carroll pop.

Thing is though, words do have meanings and the meanings multiply when fitted together: Jim is right in that it's a cop-out - in *all* sung music the sound of the words is 'an instrument' particularly if you're not a native speaker, but similarly in all music with verbal accompaniment it's possible to be distracted by the words if you do speak the language.

Besides, isn't Hyde's method to jot down scraps of overheard conversations - i.e. there is some kind of 'meaning' attached, an attempt to reflect the babble of urban existence or some such. I may be misremembering long-ago interviews here though.

Tico Tico (Tico Tico), Friday, 20 June 2003 08:20 (twenty-two years ago)

I think that might be his method, I assumed he used the lyrics more as a means of conveying a particular sensation (of urban existence maybe), and that it was more about word assocation to some extent. For me it works, even though it shoudn't (and doesn't for some people, haha). My original point was that the lyrics, yes, are senseless, but with the music it *does* convey something, somehow.

I understand that some people might not like it, however.

ham on rye (ham on rye), Friday, 20 June 2003 15:39 (twenty-two years ago)

eno always said that it doesnt matter if you have anything important to say, just that it sounds like you do.
luckily for us, LL Cool J was deeply sincere when bestowing us with the lyrical bliss that is "Deepest Bluest, My Hat Is Like A Shark's Fin"
if only more MCs would inform us that the sight of their baseball caps could in fact signify imminent danger.

Felcher (Felcher), Friday, 20 June 2003 15:48 (twenty-two years ago)

similarly in all music with verbal accompaniment it's possible to be distracted by the words if you do speak the language.

And of opposite is true, of course. If you go anywhere near Jacque Brel when you don't speak French, I fear for your eardrums. If you do, it's scarily amazing stuff.

Personally, I REALLY dislike bad lyrics - musicians, if you can't think of anything decent, really, make it in instrumental - we won't hold it against you.

Saying that, a lyrics doesn't need to make sense, or even look good on paper, to be good. Be-bop-a-lula is a prime example; fantastic lyrics, bad on paper. Pick a lyric from Astral Weeks - on paper, very bad indeed; sang, great. I think it's more to do with medium - pop music (in its widest possible sense) can accept strange grammar and weird connections with greater ease than poetry or prose (IMHO) and so while "Be bope a lula, I don't mean maybe" looks a bit flaky, in fact it's great.

HENCE . . . if a review quotes a lyric at me, and tells me how rubbish the album is using the lyric to support the argument, it'll come across as a bit of a straw-man argument anyway.

Saying that, I've got broadband, so I get free previews before I buy anyways. Good download beats bad review anyday.

Johnney B (Johnney B), Saturday, 21 June 2003 15:43 (twenty-two years ago)

"I luf him, I luf him, I luf him (she lufs him, she lufs him, she lufs him)" to thread.

Cozen (Cozen), Saturday, 21 June 2003 15:47 (twenty-two years ago)

It's actually because of this form of criticism that I have an inability to sing my own lyrics.

Andrew (enneff), Saturday, 21 June 2003 15:48 (twenty-two years ago)

But surely there's some level on which you can trust critics to select the quotes they think are actually representative, and to put them in the appropriate context -- the bum line illustrates the point that the critic thinks the lyrics suck, and is usually clearly announced as such. If you're that deeply skeptical about critics venturing opinions and providing examples -- that lyrics are weak (such as X line), that songs are strong (such as X song), that riffs are mediocre (such as X riff). . . . These judgment calls make up what's commonly known as a "review," and if you're that skeptical about critics making those calls there's not much point in reading them at all.

nabisco (nabisco), Saturday, 21 June 2003 16:01 (twenty-two years ago)

But of course: I do think it's a poor review technique to single out the worst things about a record as evidence of its badness -- it's a kind of activist reviewing that's a bit selfish, because surely a better task is to try and represent what the middle-of-road bulk of the record is actually like. This is actually more true of saying "this guitar solo sucks" than it is of quoting -- at least in the case of the lyric-quoting there's a chance you'll disagree with the critic just reading the quote!

So I think what's being discussed here isn't whether quoting is misleading. What's being discussed here is the idea that there's a sort of active bad faith going on in certain reviews, an effort to make the artist look as bad as possible rather than providing an honest appraisal of what's really going on.

The source of the bad faith: people don't like writing half-and-half reviews that say an artist is just basically okay -- if the record's good, they want to mention all the best parts as evidence, and if the record's bad, they want to point out all the warts and savage it. What's much harder is to take a fair-to-middling band and actually try and capture something true and telling about their averageness, and I certainly don't claim to have any more clue how to do this than anyone else.

nabisco (nabisco), Saturday, 21 June 2003 16:17 (twenty-two years ago)


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