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I should get around to rereading it. I'd assume "yesterday and today collide into tomorrow" somehow refers to the wacky time antics, but who knows?
― Casuistry (Chris P), Sunday, 31 October 2004 01:20 (nineteen years ago) link
This one has always irked me.
From the back of Donald Barthelme's "40 Stories":
"The prose of Donald Barthelme is a classy rag and bone shop of sophisticated prose ... a national resource of renewal, a kind of Save the Whale of language up on the beach of mindless overuse and cliches."
1) "The prose ... of sophisticated prose" The proofreading of this sentence is a national treasure of bad proofreading.
2) Admittedly, I'm not sure what a "rag and bone shop" is, but it sure doesn't sound classy. Even if it is, the words are clunky.
3) It doesn't make sense to use "Save the Whale" as a noun -- he could be compared to a whale or a campaign to save whales, but not a "Save the Whale".
4) On that note, it makes just as little sense to imagine a "Save the Whale" on a beach.
5) If the whale is beached, it's doomed. Not a good metaphor for someone who is supposedly revitalizing the language.
6) As hard as it is to describe what Barthelme does, I think the writer could come up with something more interesting to say than to point out that Barthelme avoids cliches and mindless overuse. Any good writer does that.
― Hurting (Hurting), Monday, 1 November 2004 03:38 (nineteen years ago) link
nine months pass...
The back of Star Smashers of the Galaxy Rangers has the most misleading text.
"Chuck and Jerry, two fun-loving students at an American College, discover a faster-than-light space drive and smuggle it into the football team's plane(1). They, together with the lovely Sally Goodfellow, crusty Pop(2) and lovable old John view with horror a practical joke gone awry (3) as the plane screams off to Titan, a frozen moon of Saturn.
But that's only the beginning. When lovable old John's true and awful identity becomes known(4), a wild battle across and through centuries (5) ensues, catapulting friends and deadly foes into the midst of a yarn spun from the grandest tradition of the classic 'space opera'"
1 - They don't smuggle it onto the team plane, they have free access to it and just borrow it.
2 - There is no character in the book called Pop.
3 - There isn't a pratical joke, they have to do it to save their lives.
4 - John's identity as a communist spy is the catalyst even that sends them to Titan, not his true identity is discovered on Titan.
5 - I have no idea what centuries they are talking about. The whole adventure takes about a week.
― Navek Rednam (Navek Rednam), Sunday, 28 August 2005 10:16 (eighteen years ago) link